纸— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接但缺少细节与衔接词。应先给出明确主题句，然后用一两句补充原因或例子，避免过多犹豫词（uh, umm）。可以用连词如 because / so / however 增强连贯性，并把句子控制在不超过五句。

示例: No, I haven't made paper crafts because I'm not very skilled at arts. For example, I tried origami once and struggled with the folds, so I prefer activities like writing where I feel more confident.

建议: 回答内容清晰且有观点，但有语法和表达小问题（e.g., subject-verb agreement: "letters are" vs "is"不合适用法）。可以加一两句具体例子描述信的格式或写信带来的效果，并用连接词如 "for example" 或 "because" 增强逻辑。

示例: Yes, I still write physical letters, especially for birthdays and holidays, because they feel more personal. For example, I usually include a short handwritten note and a small photo, which my friends tell me makes them feel appreciated.

建议: 回答有想法但表达不够准确与连贯，存在语法错误（"keep handwritten letters" 应为 "keeping" 或 "keep" 的结构调整）。应先给出直接结论，然后用原因和具体例子支持，避免模糊表述如 "just the same as me"，改为更具体的描述。

示例: Yes, some people still keep handwritten letters because they value the personal touch. For instance, my friend keeps all birthday letters in a box and reads them when she feels nostalgic.

建议: 回答中断频繁、语法错误（"If I going to" 应为 "If I'm going to"）且逻辑不够清晰。应使用清晰的主题句并用条件句准确表达原因，减少填充词。可以说明具体情景（例如旅行或短途外出）和用途（写笔记、记录灵感）。

示例: It depends on the trip: if I'm traveling a long distance, I usually bring paper and pens to jot down ideas or travel notes. But for short outings with friends in the city, I usually leave them at home because I don't need to write anything.

建议: 回答有明确主旨但语法与时态混用（"to write" vs "taking"），并有冗余与犹豫词。建议用一至两句补充具体例子（写日记、作文或故事）并使用连接词如 "so" 或 "because" 让理由更清楚。控制在不超过五句。

示例: As a child, I preferred writing on paper rather than drawing because I wasn't good at arts. For example, I often wrote short stories and kept a small notebook where I recorded my ideas and memories.

× No, actually I haven't because I'm not very good at crafts or arts, so I just don't want to try.

✓ No, actually I haven't because I'm not very good at crafts or art, so I just don't want to try.

句中“crafts or arts”用法不自然。英语中常用 art（不可数）泛指艺术，而crafts可以指手工艺（复数可接受）。为了平衡表达，建议使用“crafts or art”或仅用“art”。此外此句其余部分语法正确。建议在口语中说“I'm not very good at crafts or art”或更自然的“I'm not very good at arts and crafts”。

× I sometimes write physical letters to my friends, especially for their birthdays or some other holidays, and I think writing physical letters are more significant than writing digital messages.

✓ I sometimes write physical letters to my friends, especially for their birthdays or other holidays, and I think writing physical letters is more significant than writing digital messages.

主谓一致错误：短语“writing physical letters”作主语，作为动名词短语应被视为单数，因此谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。同时“some other holidays”在此语境不太自然，改为“other holidays”。建议记住动名词短语为整体时用单数动词。

× Well, some people still keep handwritten letters today because they are just the same as me. I think keep handwritten letters are more meaningful than digital notes and I always write things.

✓ Well, some people still keep handwritten letters today because they are like me. I think keeping handwritten letters is more meaningful than digital notes and I always write things.

存在多处问题：1) “they are just the same as me”表达不自然，改为“they are like me”。2) 主语动名词短语“keeping handwritten letters”作为主语应使用动名词形式并与单数动词一致，所以用“is”。原句中“keep handwritten letters”缺少动名词形式，导致语法错误。建议使用动名词作主语时加 -ing 并用单数谓语。

× If I going to, umm, very long distance, I just, uh, carry my paper and pens.

✓ If I'm going to travel a very long distance, I usually carry my paper and pens.

原句缺少be动词“am/’m”导致从句时态和结构错误（应该是进行时“I'm going to”或更自然的“I'm going to travel”）。同时口语填充词太多，建议用“usually”替换“just”以表示习惯。简化并补全动词使句子在现在时态下正确表达习惯性动作。

× But if I just uh, uh, hang out with my friends in our city, I just, uh, uh, don't want to carry.

✓ But if I just hang out with my friends in my city, I don't want to carry them.

问题是代词和省略的对象不明确：动词“carry”需有宾语，此处应为“carry them”指“paper and pens”。另外“in our city”对考官不一定合适，改为“in my city”更自然。时态和主谓结构需完整，避免省略宾语。

× Well, I used to grab some paper to write something down or taking some notes because I'm not very good at arts or handcrafts so I just want to write something instead of umm, drawing something.

✓ Well, I used to grab some paper to write something down or take some notes because I'm not very good at arts or handcrafts so I just wanted to write something instead of drawing.

原句混用了不定式和动名词并且时态不一致：并列结构应保持一致，使用“to write ... or take ...”或“writing ... or taking ...”。由于谈论过去习惯，谓语应用过去式“wanted”。另外最后的“instead of umm, drawing something”中“something”可省略，“instead of drawing”更简洁自然。建议在并列动词时保持形式一致并与句子时态一致。