纸— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答不够贴切且信息混乱。首先考官问的是“做过纸艺吗”，应直接陈述是否做过并举例具体的手工活动；避免提到无关的“数学考试”和“写满一页纸”。句子需要更简洁并补充一两个细节，如什么时候、用什么材料或学到什么。

示例: Yes, I have. When I was a child I often made paper cranes and origami animals using coloured paper; sometimes I followed tutorials to learn new folds.

建议: 总体回答直接且相关，但句子略显重复（convenient 与 express clearly 意义重叠）。可补充具体场景说明何时会写手写信，以及使用电子邮件的具体优点或缺点，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

示例: Not really. I usually use email because it’s faster and I can attach documents, although I sometimes write handwritten cards for birthdays to make them more personal.

建议: 答案有一定逻辑但用词不准确（如“write scripts”不恰当）且句子未完成。应使用更恰当的词汇（handwritten notes/letters）并给出具体例子与比较，保持句子完整并用连接词如“however”或“on the other hand”。

示例: It depends. People still keep handwritten letters for sentimental reasons, such as love letters or family notes, but for practical matters like work they usually rely on emails or digital documents.

建议: 回答思路可以，但表达错误和不自然（如“write or sing on a paper”“pen in my back”）。应改用自然表达描述携带原因及携带物品，并给出具体例子比如会议或记录电话号码。

示例: Yes, I usually carry a small notebook and a pen because my boss often asks me to take notes during meetings or jot down quick ideas and phone numbers.

建议: 回答基本相关但语法和时态有问题（mix of present and past; 'use'应为 'used'），表达较冗长。可直接给出活动并补充具体细节如画什么、喜欢的工具或频率，使内容更具体生动。

示例: As a child I used to draw with pencils and coloured markers almost every day; I especially liked sketching animals and landscapes and making little picture books to show my family.

× Yes, of course I remember that. I did a math test and then I wrote a full page of paper.

✓ Yes, of course I remember that. I took a math test and then I wrote a full page on paper.

句中动词时态和动词搭配不当。“do a test”在这里更自然用“take a test”。另外，“write a full page of paper”搭配不正确，应该用“write a full page on paper”或“fill a full page”。建议：使用固定搭配“take a test”，并用“on paper”表示在纸上写。

× Not really, because I think e-mail applications are more convenient and I can express my meaning clearly, so I always use e-mail to write.

✓ Not really, because I think email applications are more convenient and I can express my meaning clearly, so I always write emails.

句子中“use e-mail to write”搭配不自然。应把动词放在前面，用“write emails”或“use email to write messages”。另外“e-mail”写法可简化为“email”。建议：使用自然搭配“write emails”。（注意：主要问题为情态动词/用法相关的表达不当及搭配问题。）

× It depends. If someone wants to express their love or emotions, they may select to write scripts. By contrast, if they want to write some work tasks, they may use.

✓ It depends. If someone wants to express their love or emotions, they may choose to write a letter. By contrast, if they want to write about work tasks, they may use email.

原句中动词搭配和句子结构有误。“select to write scripts”不自然，通常用“choose to write a letter”。“write scripts”意味着写剧本，不符合语境。第二句不完整，“they may use”后需有宾语，补上“email”。建议：用“choose to write a letter”表示写信，用“use email”表示写工作相关内容。

× Yes I do because my boss always asks me to write or sing on a paper so I have to take a pen in my back to deal with these situations.

✓ Yes, I do because my boss always asks me to write on paper, so I have to carry a pen in my bag to deal with these situations.

原句有多个错误：1) “write or sing on a paper”应为“write on paper”；“sing”显然不合语境。2) “on a paper”通常说“on paper”或“on a piece of paper”。3) “take a pen in my back”错误，正确应为“carry a pen in my bag”。建议：用“write on paper”或“on a piece of paper”，并用“carry a pen in my bag”。

× When I was a child, I remember that I always use pencil to draw on paper because I was interested in painting and drawing, so I love this.

✓ When I was a child, I remember that I always used a pencil to draw on paper because I was interested in painting and drawing, so I loved it.

时态不一致：既然在谈过去，应将现在时“use”改为过去时“used”。另外“always use pencil”需加不定冠词“a pencil”。结尾“so I love this”应改为过去时“so I loved it”。建议：保持整个句子在过去时态，使用“used a pencil”和“loved it”。