纸— Part 1 评分报告

建议: You did not answer the question. Give a direct response that addresses making paper crafts, then add one or two brief specific details. Keep to under 5 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

示例: Yes, I have made several paper crafts. For example, I often fold origami cranes and make paper flowers, and last month I crafted a paper lantern for a festival.

建议: Your reply is unrelated to the question. Directly state whether you still write letters and provide a reason or an example. Use a topic sentence first, then one supporting detail with a linking word.

示例: No, I rarely write physical letters anymore because I prefer emailing or texting; however, I do write postcards when I travel to family.

建议: Your answer is completely off-topic. Provide a general opinion about whether people keep letters today and support it with a specific reason or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

示例: Some people still keep handwritten letters because they value the sentimental and personal touch; for example, many families keep old love letters and holiday cards as keepsakes.

建议: The response does not address the question. Answer directly about your habit of carrying paper and pens, then add a short, specific reason or example. Keep it natural and concise.

示例: Yes, I often carry a small notebook and a pen when I go out because I like to jot down ideas or shopping lists; for instance, I always keep them in my bag for errands.

建议: Your answer is partially on-topic but unclear and grammatically incorrect. Use past tense to describe childhood activities, start with a clear topic sentence, and provide a specific example or brief detail. Use linking words if adding more than one detail.

示例: When I was a child I liked making paper dolls and drawing on paper; for example, I would cut out outfits and design stories for each doll.

× My name is Anna.

✓ My name is Anna.

No grammatical error related to the listed problem types. The sentence is correct as a response to the examiner's question about crafts would be unexpected content-wise but grammatically fine; therefore no change is required.

× I am from Turkey.

✓ I am from Turkey.

This sentence correctly uses the present simple (to be) to state origin. It matches the appropriate grammar type and needs no correction.

× I love strawberry.

✓ I love strawberries.

The error is a singular/plural usage for a countable noun used in a general sense. Use the plural form 'strawberries' or the uncountable construction 'strawberry flavor' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use plural when speaking about the fruit in general.

× I am a girl.

✓ I am a girl.

Grammatically correct as a statement of identity. No correction needed.

× I like sing song.

✓ I liked singing songs.

The student used the present tense 'like' and incorrect verb forms. The question asked 'What did you like to do with paper as a child?' so the past tense is required. Use the past tense 'liked' and the gerund 'singing' for verb+ -ing after like, and plural 'songs' or leave singular depending on meaning. Suggestion: use 'liked' for past and use verb+ -ing after like: 'liked making paper dolls' or 'liked singing songs'.