公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 你的回答没有直接表达“喜欢”或“不喜欢”，因此无法展示观点、理由和具体细节。可以先明确回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，然后使用“because”补充原因，并举一个童年时在公园进行的活动。

示例: Yes, I did. I enjoyed going to parks because I could play on the swings and run around with my friends. We usually went there at weekends.

建议: 回答过于简短，未回应你现在是否喜欢去公园。建议先给出明确观点，再说明公园能带来的好处，例如放松、锻炼或亲近自然，并用“especially”或“because”连接细节。

示例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. They give me a chance to relax and get some fresh air, especially after a busy day at work. I also like taking a walk there at weekends.

建议: 你需要明确表达“想要”或“不想要”。如果选择想要，可以说明城市需要更多公园的具体原因，例如改善空气质量、提供休闲空间，并补充公园应具备的设施。

示例: Yes, I’d definitely like to see more parks in my city. They would provide residents with more places to exercise and relax. In addition, more green spaces could improve the air quality.

建议: 回答没有提到任何未来想去的公园。建议先直接说出一个具体公园或公园类型，然后说明想去的原因，并补充计划进行的活动。可以使用“because”或“so”使答案更连贯。

示例: Yes, I’d like to visit Central Park in New York in the future. I want to go there because it is famous and has beautiful scenery. I’d like to walk around the lake and take some photos.