公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers directly, avoid filler sounds (uh), fix verb forms and article use, and limit to up to 4–5 sentences. Add one specific detail (e.g., a favorite activity or memory) and use a linking word to connect ideas.

示例: I don't remember visiting parks much as a child. However, now I enjoy going to Weston Park because it is cozy and quite large. I often spend hours there sitting on a bench and reading, which helps me relax. Also, I like watching families and dogs play nearby.

建议: Answer directly and correct collocations and word choice (e.g., 'grab a coffee', 'go to the park', 'small paths' or 'green spaces'). Reduce repetition and use a linking word when adding details. Provide one specific routine or preference.

示例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually grab a coffee and walk along the small winding paths while listening to music. This routine helps me clear my mind and get some light exercise.

建议: Give a direct answer, correct grammar (remove 'it's has'), avoid hesitations, and be specific about why you want more parks and where. Use a linking word to explain consequence or reason and keep it to 3–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because green spaces improve residents’ quality of life. Although the city is small, I hope each neighborhood will have at least one park. In fact, a new park is being built near my home, which I am really looking forward to.

建议: Use formal contractions and correct grammar ('I want', 'compare whether they are dirty or clean'). Avoid informal 'wanna' in the test. Be specific about which countries or parks and give a reason for the comparison. Keep it concise and coherent with linking words.

示例: Yes, I want to visit famous parks abroad, such as Hyde Park in London and Central Park in New York. I would like to compare their cleanliness and maintenance with parks in Ukraine to learn different approaches to park management. This would help me understand what improvements could be made at home.

× I don't remember going visiting a park in my childhood.

✓ I don't remember visiting a park in my childhood.

The verb 'remember' should be followed by a single verb form; using both 'going' and 'visiting' is redundant and incorrect. Use either 'remember going to a park' or 'remember visiting a park'. Here 'visiting a park' is concise and correct.

× now I love Weston parks as it's cozy and it's kind of huge in my city.

✓ Now I love Weston Park as it's cozy and quite large in my city.

Use the singular proper name 'Weston Park' with the definite article if necessary; 'parks' is incorrect if referring to one park. 'Kind of huge' is informal and awkward here; 'quite large' is a clearer adjective choice.

× So that's a place where I'm staying for hours on the bench and just reading.

✓ So that's a place where I stay for hours on a bench reading.

The progressive 'I'm staying' suggests a temporary action now, but the meaning is habitual, so simple present 'I stay' (or better 'I sit') is appropriate. Word order 'on the bench and just reading' is awkward; use 'on a bench reading' or 'sitting on a bench and reading'.

× I actually love grabbing some coffee during going to park and walking around those small tiny. Bases.

✓ I actually love grabbing some coffee when I go to the park and walking around those small paths.

Do not use 'during going to park'; use 'when I go to the park' or 'while going to the park'. 'Walking around those small tiny. Bases.' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely intended 'small paths' or 'small bases'—'paths' fits context. Remove redundant adjectives 'small tiny'.

× even though it's has a lot of uh, as my city is not that big.

✓ even though it doesn't have a lot, as my city is not that big.

The phrase 'it's has' mixes 'it is' and 'has' incorrectly. Use 'it doesn't have' to express lack. The clause 'as my city is not that big' explains the reason and is fine after the comma.

× However, I'd like to see one in my neighborhood, umm, and it's actually starting to build so it's going to be in future.

✓ However, I'd like to see one in my neighborhood, and it's actually starting to be built, so it will be available in the future.

'Starting to build' incorrectly uses active form; the park is being built, so passive 'starting to be built' or 'under construction' is correct. 'Going to be in future' is ungrammatical; use 'will be available/in the future' or 'will be completed in the future'.

× I wanna visit some parks abroad.

✓ I want to visit some parks abroad.

'Wanna' is informal spoken contraction; in written or corrected responses use 'want to'. This is a register issue and relates to standard modal/verb usage.

× I just wanna compare either there due dirty or clean because I really want to make that comparison between our Ukrainian parks and that parks which are above my country.

✓ I just want to compare whether they are dirty or clean because I really want to compare our Ukrainian parks with the parks in those countries above my country.

Multiple problems: 'either there due dirty or clean' is ungrammatical — use 'whether they are dirty or clean'. 'That parks' is incorrect article/pronoun agreement; use 'the parks' or 'those parks'. Also 'above my country' is vague; 'in those countries north of my country' or 'in those countries' is clearer. Pronouns must agree in number ('they' for 'parks').