公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Используйте правильные времена и согласование глаголов; давайте развернутый ответ с вводным предложением и 1–2 деталями. Например, скажите, что вы любили парки и почему, добавьте короткое уточнение о действиях или чувствах.

示例: Yes, I loved going to parks when I was a child. I often played on the swings and picnicked with my family, which made those visits very fun and memorable.

建议: Исправьте грамматику (подлежащее + правильная форма глагола) и расширьте ответ связкой; укажите частоту или причину, чтобы сделать ответ естественным и информативным.

示例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks now. I visit a nearby park every weekend to relax and exercise, especially walking along the paths and watching birds.

建议: Используйте правильную форму существительных и добавьте причину или предпочтение; добавьте связующее слово, чтобы показать аргументацию (например, because, since).

示例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for families and improve air quality, and I think new small parks in residential areas would be especially helpful.

建议: Ответ должен быть цельным предложением; избегайте фрагментов. Назовите конкретное место и объясните, почему вы хотите туда поехать, используя связующее слово.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit Disneyland in the future because I enjoy theme parks and I'm excited to try the rides and see the shows there.

× I like go to park as a child.

✓ I liked going to parks as a child.

ID 5: Past tense issue. The question asks about a past habit 'as a child', so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'liked' instead of 'like'. Also use the gerund form 'going' after verbs of liking, and plural 'parks' or include the article: 'the park' or 'parks'. Suggestion: Use past tense + gerund and correct number: 'I liked going to parks as a child.'

× I like goes to park now.

✓ I like going to parks now.

ID 2 and 8: Third person singular issue & Verb + -ing form. The subject 'I' requires the base form, not a third-person singular form 'goes'; however when expressing current preference, use 'like' + gerund 'going'. Also use plural 'parks' or 'the park'. Suggestion: 'I like going to parks now.'

× I would like to see more park in my city.

✓ I would like to see more parks in my city.

ID 1 and 14: Singular and plural issue & Incorrect use of quantifiers. 'More' requires a plural noun when comparing countable items. Use 'parks' rather than singular 'park'. Suggestion: 'I would like to see more parks in my city.'

× I would. Go to Disneyland in the future.

✓ I would like to go to Disneyland in the future.

ID 26 and 4: Sentence structure errors & Modal verb usage. The student's reply is fragmented and missing the main verb 'like' that completes 'Would you...?' question. Use the polite conditional 'I would like to go...' as a full sentence. Suggestion: 'I would like to go to Disneyland in the future.'