公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cần nói rõ thời quá khứ (sử dụng thì đúng), tránh tiếng lấp và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và có 1 câu chủ đề theo sau bởi 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: dùng ‘I loved going to parks when I was a child’ và nêu lý do cụ thể như chơi trò chơi, chạy nhảy, hoặc đi picnic. Hạn chế từ ngữ thừa và tiếng ậm ừ.

示例: I loved going to parks when I was a child because I enjoyed playing on the swings and exploring the trees. For example, my friends and I often had picnics there on weekends.

建议: Cần dùng thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen, giảm tiếng lấp và sắp xếp câu rõ ràng. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi bổ sung hoạt động cụ thể làm rõ lý do. Dùng liên từ đơn giản như ‘and’ hoặc ‘so’ để kết nối ý. Tránh lặp từ không cần thiết (‘going to parks’ lặp nhiều lần).

示例: I still like going to parks now because I play badminton and football there regularly. I usually go with friends on weekends, so it helps me stay active.

建议: Cần trả lời rõ câu hỏi và sửa thông tin mâu thuẫn. Nếu không sống ở thành phố, hãy nói rõ bạn không có ý kiến về thành phố và có thể nói về làng của bạn. Tránh lặp và nói mạch lạc: nêu chủ đề rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với chi tiết cụ thể. Ví dụ: ‘I don’t live in the city, so I’m not sure, but my village could use…’

示例: I don't live in the city, so I'm not sure if it needs more parks. In my village, however, we could use a small community park where children can play and neighbors can meet.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và dùng thì phù hợp khi nói về tương lai. Tránh phủ định chung chung và tiếng lấp. Nếu có lý do, nêu cụ thể: bận công việc, thích nghỉ tại nhà, hoặc dự định đi du lịch. Dùng cấu trúc đơn giản như ‘I probably won't go to parks much in the future because…’ và cung cấp 1 ví dụ.

示例: I probably won't visit parks much in the future because I expect to be busy with work and prefer to relax at home. For example, after work I will usually exercise at a nearby gym or rest instead of going to a park.

× Yes, I do. I very like uh, going to park as a child, uh be because MMM. Is very extremely funny.

✓ Yes, I did. I really liked going to parks as a child because it was extremely fun.

The student mixes present and past tenses. The question asks about a past habit ('as a child'), so use past tense ('did', 'liked'). 'Very like' is incorrect; use adverb 'really' before 'liked'. 'Going to park' needs plural or article: 'going to parks' or 'going to the park'. 'Is very extremely funny' misuses present tense and doubles intensifiers; use past tense 'it was extremely fun'. Suggestion: Use past simple for childhood habits and place adverb before the main verb: 'I really liked going to parks as a child because it was extremely fun.'

× Umm, I am sometime, uh, going to parks now. However, I still like going to parks, uh, to playing badminton and uh, playing football.

✓ Umm, I sometimes go to parks now. However, I still like going to parks to play badminton and football.

The student uses 'I am sometime going' which is incorrect for habitual actions; use adverb 'sometimes' and simple present 'go'. 'To playing' is wrong after 'like' or 'to' in this structure; use the base verb 'play'. Suggestion: For current habitual actions use simple present with adverbs of frequency and use infinitive or base verb correctly: 'I sometimes go to parks... to play badminton and football.'

× Uh, no, I am. I don't live in city, I live in village and also I and I also see more parks in my city.

✓ Uh, no. I don't live in the city; I live in a village. I have not seen many parks in my city.

'I am.' is incomplete and unnecessary. Missing articles: 'in city' should be 'in the city'; 'in village' needs 'a village'. 'I and I also see more parks in my city' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely meaning is they have not seen many parks, so use 'I have not seen many parks in my city' or 'there are not many parks in my city'. Suggestion: Use correct articles with place nouns and clear subject-verb structure: 'I don't live in the city; I live in a village, and there are not many parks in my city.'

× No, umm, I don't. I don't want to going to going to the park in the future because in the future I, I often works and, umm, relax.

✓ No, I don't. I don't want to go to the park in the future because in the future I will often work and relax.

'Want to going' is incorrect; after 'want to' use the base verb 'go'. Repetition 'going to going to' is erroneous. 'I often works' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong tense; 'often' with future should be 'will often work'. Use 'will' for future intention. 'Relax' can remain base verb after 'will'. Suggestion: Use base verb after 'want to' and use future simple for habitual future actions: 'I don't want to go to the park in the future because I will often work and relax.'