公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct, grammatically correct and add one brief supporting detail. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, correct verb forms, and one specific memory or reason. Keep it under five sentences and avoid redundancy.

示例: Yes, I enjoyed going to parks when I was a child. I used to go every weekend with my parents and loved playing on the swings and feeding ducks in the pond.

建议: Give a clear, cohesive answer in present tense, then add a specific reason or frequency using linking words (e.g., however, because). Fix word choice and grammar (e.g., "funny" → "good" or "interesting"). Keep it concise and coherent.

示例: Yes, I still like going to parks, although I don't go very often. Because there isn't a good park near my house, I usually visit one about once a month when I have free time.

建议: Answer directly with a complete sentence and give a reason why more parks would be beneficial. Use a linking word to connect your opinion and reason. Avoid missing verbs and keep it under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they provide green space for exercise and relaxation, and they would improve the neighbourhood's atmosphere.

建议: Respond with a clear plan or desire using correct tense and logical flow. Start with a topic sentence stating which park you'd like to visit, then give specific reasons and a brief obstacle if relevant. Use linking words (for example, however, because) and avoid contradictory phrases and repetition.

示例: Yes, I would like to visit Central Park in New York City because it is very large and has many attractions. However, I can't go at the moment due to financial constraints, but I hope to visit it in a few years.

× Yes I do to go to the park when I was child.

✓ Yes, I used to go to the park when I was a child.

The original mixes present tense 'do' with a past-time clause 'when I was child' and omits the article 'a'. Use 'used to' to describe habitual past actions and include the indefinite article before 'child'. Also add commas for clarity.

× Yeah, I do. Sometime I go, sometimes not. There is no funny park here near my house, but I like to go.

✓ Yes, I do. Sometimes I go, sometimes I don't. There is no fun park near my house, but I like going to parks.

Use 'sometimes' (plural) and contract 'do not' to 'don't' for negative present habit. 'Funny park' is incorrect collocation; 'fun park' or 'amusement park' is appropriate. 'Like to go' is acceptable, but 'like going to parks' is more natural when speaking generally.

× Yes, I want see.

✓ Yes, I want to see more parks.

After 'want' a full infinitive with 'to' is required: 'want to see'. Also complete the idea by specifying 'more parks' to match the question. This corrects the missing infinitive marker and clarifies the object.

× Yes, but I would like, but I don't know the name.

✓ Yes, I would, but I don't know the name.

The original has redundant 'but' and an incomplete structure. For a conditional preference use 'I would' (short for 'I would like to') or 'I would like to go, but I don't know the name.' Remove the repeated 'but' to fix sentence structure.

× There is a park in New York City, it's so big.

✓ There is a park in New York City that is very big.

The comma splice joins two independent clauses incorrectly. Use a relative clause 'that is' or a semicolon/period. 'So big' is colloquial; 'very big' is more neutral.

× The biggest part park in New York City.

✓ It is one of the biggest parks in New York City.

The original is ungrammatical. Use 'one of the biggest parks' to express that the park is among the largest. 'Part park' is incorrect phrase; 'park' suffices.

× So I won't go there. But I can't 'cause I don't have money right now. So maybe in future I will go.

✓ So I can't go there now because I don't have money, but maybe I will go in the future.

Mixing 'won't' with present inability is confusing. Use present 'can't' for current inability and 'will' or 'might' for future possibility. Replace informal ''cause' with 'because' and use 'in the future' for natural phrasing.