公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Give a direct topic sentence but expand with a brief reason and one specific memory or detail. Use past tense for childhood and link ideas with a connector (e.g., "because" or "although"). Keep it natural and within 3–4 short sentences.

示例: No, I didn't really enjoy going to parks when I was a child because I preferred playing video games at home. For example, I often stayed indoors on weekends and only went to the park once or twice a year with my family. As a result, I never got used to outdoor games.

建议: Provide a fuller response: begin with a clear topic sentence in present tense, then give a reason and one specific example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and avoid one-word answers.

示例: No, I still don't enjoy going to parks because I find them crowded and noisy. For instance, when I tried visiting a popular park last year, it was difficult to relax or go for a quiet walk. Therefore I usually choose quieter places like riverside paths.

建议: Start with a clear opinion, then explain why and give specific benefits or examples. Use linking words such as "because", "for example", or "so". Make sure phrasing is natural ("I'd like to see" or "I would like to see"). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and give residents places to relax. For example, additional green spaces could provide safe playgrounds for children and quiet areas for elderly people to exercise. This would make the neighbourhood healthier and more pleasant.

建议: Answer in a complete sentence and give a brief reason or alternative plan. Use future forms (e.g., "I don't have any particular park in mind" or "I don't plan to visit any soon") and add a supporting detail or suggestion of what you might prefer instead.

示例: I don't have any particular park in mind that I want to visit in the near future because I rarely go to parks. Instead, I might prefer visiting a botanical garden or a quiet hiking trail when I want to spend time outdoors.

× No, I don't like.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question 'Did you like going to parks as a child?' is in the past tense. The student's answer uses the present simple negative 'I don't like', which mismatches the past context. Use the past simple negative 'I didn't (like them)' or a full form 'No, I didn't like them.' Suggestion: match verb tense to the question by using past simple for past experiences. Note: If the student meant a general present dislike, they should respond to the present-tense question instead.

× No.

✓ No, I don't.

The examiner asked 'Do you still like going to parks now?' which expects a present-tense response. The single-word reply 'No.' is acceptable colloquially but lacks clarity. Better to answer with a complete sentence such as 'No, I don't.' or 'No, I don't anymore.' Suggestion: provide a full clause matching the present tense to be clear.

× Yes, I like to see more parks in my city.

✓ Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city.

The question 'Would you like to see more parks in your city?' uses the conditional/modal 'would like', so the appropriate response is 'I would like...'. The student's 'I like to see...' incorrectly uses present simple and an infinitive; it changes meaning. Use 'would like' to express a desire or preference. Alternatively 'Yes, I'd like to see more parks in my city.' is more natural.

× No one.

✓ No, I don't.

The examiner asked 'Are there any parks you want to go to in the future?' The student answered 'No one,' which is a pronoun used for people, not places. For parks (places) use 'No' or 'No, I don't' or 'No, there aren't any I want to go to.' Suggestion: use 'no' or a full negative clause that matches the non-human referent.