公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngữ pháp và từ vựng nhiều lỗi (ví dụ: 'which had many public amenities', 'monstrous' dùng sai), câu hơi dài và lặp ý. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 2–3 chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ đúng (e.g., 'because', 'for example', 'so'), và chú ý thì động từ/giới từ. Giữ tối đa 3–4 câu.

示例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child because they had many playgrounds and swings. For example, I often rode my bike there and played games with friends. I also enjoyed being close to nature and exploring the trees and flowers.

建议: Nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng cấu trúc ngắn gọn và chính xác. Hiện tại câu có lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt không tự nhiên ('the atmosphere is polluting', 'the more populous are'). Nên giải thích cụ thể với 1–2 lý do, dùng liên từ hợp lý và tránh nói 'you know'.

示例: Not really. I avoid parks now because they are often crowded and polluted, so I can't exercise comfortably. As a result, I prefer going to a gym or quieter green spaces nearby.

建议: Ý tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi lựa chọn từ và ngữ pháp ('parts' instead of 'parks', 'prevent the air from polluting', 'they handle authority is gonna be'). Hãy mở đầu trực tiếp, đưa ra 2 lí do cụ thể với liên từ (e.g., 'because', 'also'), và kết luận ngắn gọn về mong muốn hoặc hy vọng.

示例: Yes, I would. Building more parks in Hanoi would improve public health by encouraging exercise and would help clean the air by increasing green areas. I hope the local government will invest in more parks and better maintenance.

建议: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và thiếu thông tin. Thay vì chỉ nói 'No', hãy giải thích vì sao hoặc nêu một lựa chọn thay thế để mở rộng cuộc hội thoại. Dùng 1–2 câu bổ sung nêu lý do hoặc kế hoạch.

示例: Not really; I don't have a specific park in mind at the moment because most local parks are crowded. If I had the chance, I would visit a quieter botanical garden to relax and photograph plants.

× When I was a child I really loved going to parks because parks which had many public amenities to do and it also monstrous for children to play there.

✓ When I was a child, I really loved going to parks because they had many public amenities and were great for children to play in.

The original sentence mixes a relative clause incorrectly ('parks which had many public amenities to do') and uses the word 'monstrous' incorrectly. Use the pronoun 'they' to refer to parks and restructure the relative clause: 'they had many public amenities.' Also use 'great for children to play in' to convey the intended meaning. Ensure commas after introductory phrases.

× Additionally, I could go for work, ride the bike, make new friends and connect, be close to nature.

✓ Additionally, I could go for walks, ride my bike, make new friends, and be close to nature.

Parallel structure is needed for the list of activities. 'Go for work' is incorrect for park activities; 'go for walks' fits. Use 'ride my bike' (possessive) and keep verbs in the same base form. Remove the redundant comma before 'be close to nature.'

× I don't like going to parks, you know, because the atmosphere is polluting, prevents me from doing exercise there.

✓ I don't like going to parks, you know, because the atmosphere is polluted and it prevents me from exercising there.

Use 'polluted' (adjective) rather than 'polluting' to describe the atmosphere. Connect two clauses with 'and' and use the gerund 'exercising' after 'prevents me from.'

× The more populous are, the lesser parks can contain people.

✓ The more populous the city becomes, the fewer people the parks can accommodate.

The original phrase 'the more populous are' is ungrammatical. Use a clear comparative structure: 'The more populous the city becomes.' Also use 'fewer' with countable 'people' and 'accommodate' instead of 'contain.'

× So that's why I don't really love going to parks much.

✓ So that's why I don't really like going to parks much.

'Love' is too strong given the negative reasons; 'like' is more natural here. Keep 'really' and 'much' placement consistent: 'don't really like ... much.'

× Yeah, I want to see more parks in Hanoi capital because parts will not only help people improve their health but also prevent the air of the city from polluting.

✓ Yeah, I want to see more parks in Hanoi because parks will not only help people improve their health but also help prevent the city's air from becoming polluted.

Don't say 'Hanoi capital'—use 'Hanoi.' 'Parts' is a typo for 'parks.' Use 'help prevent the city's air from becoming polluted' for natural phrasing and correct article use.

× Beside it will make a green space for everyone to relax and reduce stress.

✓ Besides, they will create green spaces where everyone can relax and reduce stress.

Use 'Besides' or 'Besides that' as a conjunctive adverb and plural 'green spaces' to match 'parks.' Use 'create' instead of 'make' and 'where everyone can relax' for clearer relative clause.

× I hope in the near future they handle authority is gonna be to build more park, make the best condition for people to live.

✓ I hope that in the near future the authorities will build more parks and create better conditions for people to live in.

The original has word order errors and informal 'gonna.' Use 'I hope that' and 'the authorities will' (future tense). Use plural 'parks' and 'create better conditions' with the preposition 'for people to live in.' Avoid colloquial 'gonna.'

× No.

✓ No, I don't have any specific parks in mind.

Answer 'No' is grammatically a fragment without a verb; in a speaking test a full sentence is preferable. Provide a complete sentence: 'No, I don't have any specific parks in mind.'