公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng về thời gian (quá khứ), ngữ pháp thì nên dùng thì quá khứ; tránh từ không rõ nghĩa (ví dụ: "box"). Nên cung cấp thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể liên quan lý do (ví dụ: trải nghiệm cụ thể với sâu hoặc khu vực bẩn) và liên kết các ý bằng từ nối đơn giản. Giữ độ dài không quá 5 câu, tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

示例: To be honest, I didn't like going to parks when I was a child because I once found a lot of worms on the grass and that scared me. Because of that experience, I felt the parks were dirty and avoided playing there.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc: dùng thì hiện tại để diễn tả sở thích hiện tại; tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "I am an introvert"). Thêm một lý do cụ thể về hiện tại (ví dụ: không thích đông người) và dùng từ nối như "because" hoặc "so" để liên kết ý.

示例: I still don't enjoy going to parks now because I'm an introvert and I prefer quiet, private places. For example, I usually choose to stay at home or visit small cafés instead of crowded parks.

建议: Câu trả lời lẽ ra phải trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi (Yes/No/Not really) và giải thích lý do rõ ràng. Sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc: dùng chủ ngữ rõ ràng, tránh mơ hồ ("you just can't like work to that"). Nếu muốn nêu ý kiến, hãy nói rõ có muốn thêm công viên hay không và vì sao (ví dụ: đã có nhiều công viên nên không cần thêm).

示例: I don't think we need many more parks because there are already plenty in each district. For example, most neighborhoods have at least one park within walking distance, so adding more would not be necessary.

建议: Trả lời nên ngắn gọn, dùng thì tương lai nếu cần dự định, hoặc hiện tại đơn để diễn tả ý định chung; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp ("I am a introvert" → "I'm an introvert"). Thêm một ví dụ ngắn nếu muốn giải thích (ví dụ: hoạt động thay thế). Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu và dùng từ nối nếu có lý do.

示例: No, I don't plan to visit any parks in the future because I'm an introvert and I prefer staying at home. For instance, I usually spend my free time reading or watching movies instead of going out to parks.

× To be honest, when I was a child, I don't like to go to the box 'cause I'm scared of some worms.

✓ To be honest, when I was a child, I didn't like to go to the park because I was scared of worms.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a child') so verbs should be in the past tense. 'Don't like' should be 'didn't like' and 'I'm scared' should be 'I was scared'. Also 'box' seems to be a wrong word for 'park' and 'some worms' is better as 'worms'. Suggestion: use past simple for habitual past actions and match time reference.

× Yeah, I think it's kinda dirty for me to play in the parks.

✓ Yes, I think it's kind of dirty for me to play in parks.

The speaker is expressing a present general opinion, so present simple 'think' is correct; main issue is word choice and article use: 'kinda' is informal — use 'kind of'; 'the parks' is unnecessary if speaking generally, use 'parks'. Suggestion: use standard forms and appropriate articles for general statements.

× Uh, in the question I just answered that I don't like to go to the park, but in in that time I still don't like to go to the park 'cause I am an introvert.

✓ Uh, in the question I just answered that I didn't like to go to the park, but at that time I still didn't like to go to the park because I was an introvert.

Referring to a past period ('that time') requires past tense: 'didn't like' and 'was an introvert'. Also 'in in' is a repetition and should be 'at that time'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense when describing past feelings or states.

× I don't like to hang out.

✓ I don't like to hang out.

This sentence is a correct present simple negative statement expressing current preference. No grammatical change needed. Suggestion: keep present simple for habitual or general preferences.

× Of my city, it's many parks you can go to, like in every district you can find many parks and you just can't like work to that 'cause it's kinda close.

✓ In my city, there are many parks you can go to; in every district you can find parks, and you don't have to travel far because they are close.

Sentence had multiple issues: wrong preposition/order ('Of my city' should be 'In my city'), incorrect 'it's many parks' should be 'there are many parks' (there be issue), 'you just can't like work to that' is ungrammatical — likely intended 'you don't have to travel far', and 'it's kinda close' should agree in number 'they are close'. Suggestion: use 'there are' for existence, correct word order, and clear verbs for ability/necessity.

× No, there's all, no any parks I wanna go to in the future 'cause I don't like to go to the park.

✓ No, there aren't any parks I want to go to in the future because I don't like to go to parks.

Mixed and incorrect use of 'there's all, no any' should be 'there aren't any' to indicate nonexistence. 'Wanna' is informal; use 'want to'. Also change 'the park' to 'parks' for general statement. Suggestion: use correct negative form with 'there are not any' and standard vocabulary.

× I am a introvert, I don't want to hang out and I find it dirty to play in the park.

✓ I am an introvert; I don't want to hang out, and I find it dirty to play in parks.

Use 'an introvert' not 'a introvert' because 'introvert' begins with a vowel sound. Also for general dislike of parks use plural 'parks' rather than 'the park'. Suggestion: choose 'a' or 'an' based on initial sound and use plural for general statements.