公园— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is short and contains unclear wording and grammar mistakes. Give a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct nouns (parks, parents) and verbs, and avoid repetition. Keep it natural and under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I loved going to parks as a child. I often went with my parents and enjoyed running around and playing on the swings, which made me very active and happy.

建议: The response is confusing and contains incorrect words and informal fragments. Start with a clear statement, then give concrete details about what you do in parks now and why you enjoy them. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make it coherent and avoid slang or unclear words.

示例: Yes, I still enjoy going to parks. I usually go to relax and read under the trees because the green space is peaceful, and I can spend my free time away from noise.

建议: The answer is unclear and does not directly explain reasons. Give a clear opinion and then support it with specific reasons (e.g., health, environment, community). Use logical connectors such as because or since to link ideas.

示例: Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city because they improve air quality and provide safe places for families to exercise and relax.

建议: The answer is short and contains minor word choice errors (perks -> parks). If you have no particular park in mind, say so but add a reason or mention types of parks you might visit in future to expand the answer. Keep it concise and natural.

示例: No, I don't have any specific park in mind right now, but I would like to visit a botanical garden or a large riverside park if I get the chance.

× Yes, I like to go to parents of the child. And running myself.

✓ Yes, I liked going to parks as a child. I used to run around by myself.

The original sentence uses incorrect and confusing pronouns and nouns ('parents of the child' and 'running myself') that do not match the meaning. The examiner asked about parks, so 'parks' is the correct noun. Also the time reference is past, so use past tense 'liked' and 'used to'. Separate ideas into two clauses for clarity: 'liked going to parks' and 'used to run around by myself.' Suggestions: use the appropriate noun (park/parks), correct pronoun 'myself' with a verb phrase ('run around by myself'), and match tense to the question (past).

× Yeah, that's still like good pugs, No one parking a **** but it's full of green fruits. I can take my free time there.

✓ Yes, I still like going to parks. No one is parking there, and they're full of greenery. I can spend my free time there.

Multiple issues: incorrect nouns ('pugs' instead of 'parks'), wrong verb forms and punctuation. The question asks about present preference, so present tense is needed: 'I still like going to parks.' For continuous actions 'No one is parking there' or better 'there is no parking' depending on intended meaning. 'Full of green fruits' likely meant 'full of greenery' or 'trees/green plants.' 'Take my free time' is non-idiomatic; use 'spend my free time.' Suggestions: use correct vocabulary (parks, greenery), use present simple for habits ('I still like') and correct verbs for states ('there is no parking' or 'no one is parking').

× Yes, I definitely thought to be more coffee messages because several notes my city real big group.

✓ Yes, I would definitely like to see more parks because my city is quite large and needs more green spaces.

This sentence is incoherent: words like 'thought to be more coffee messages' and 'several notes' do not convey meaning. Interpret the intended idea: the student wants more parks. Use a conditional/wish structure 'I would definitely like to see more parks' or 'I definitely think there should be more parks.' Provide a reason with a clear clause: 'because my city is quite large and needs more green spaces.' Suggestions: keep subject-verb-object order, use clear vocabulary (parks, green spaces), and use a justified reason clause starting with 'because.'

× No, there aren't any perks that I want to go.

✓ No, there aren't any parks that I want to go to.

The word 'perks' is incorrect; the intended noun is 'parks.' Also the preposition 'to' is needed at the end of 'go to.' The sentence uses the negative 'there aren't any,' which is fine for existence, but the noun must be correct. Suggestions: use correct noun 'parks' and include the preposition 'to' after 'go.'