视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise with a clear topic sentence, fix grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific example. Use linking words if you expand. Focus on natural phrasing: use correct verb forms and articles, and limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because they help me remember trips. For example, when I visited Taroko Gorge I took several landscape shots to capture the cliffs and river, which remind me of that day.

建议: Answer directly and consistently; choose one option and give a clear reason with specific supporting detail. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'natural' not 'naturalized') and avoid contradiction between 'go somewhere natural' and choosing 'urban'. Keep it within 1–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer rural views because after busy work I like to relax in nature; for example, I enjoy walking through quiet forests and looking at mountains, which helps me unwind.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence saying which you prefer, correct repetitive wording, and provide a specific reason or example. Use concise language and avoid repeating 'my country' twice. Mention a concrete place to make the answer more vivid.

示例: I prefer views in my own country, Taiwan, because it has many beautiful mountain areas. For instance, I love the sunrise at Alishan, which offers spectacular mountain scenery and makes local trips very memorable.

× The best way to memorize the landscapes or trips is to take a photo from the trip and I love to taking pictures of different.

✓ The best way to remember landscapes or trips is to take photos during the trip, and I love taking pictures of different views.

The original has incorrect verb forms: 'memorize' is OK but 'remember' is more natural; 'take a photo from the trip' is awkward—use 'take photos during the trip'; 'I love to taking' mixes infinitive and -ing form. After verbs like 'love' you can use either the infinitive ('to take') or the gerund ('taking'), but not both together. Also add the noun 'views' to complete 'different'. Suggestions: use 'love taking' or 'love to take', use plural 'photos' for general actions, and place modifiers ('during the trip') correctly.

× After hard and busy work, I love to go somewhere naturalized. So between the urban areas or rural areas, I would love to choose the urban.

✓ After hard, busy work, I love to go somewhere natural. So between urban and rural areas, I would choose urban areas.

'Naturalized' is incorrect here; use the adjective 'natural' to describe places. 'Hard and busy work' is acceptable but 'hard, busy work' or 'a hard, busy day at work' is more natural. 'Between the urban areas or rural areas' is incorrectly phrased: use 'between urban and rural areas' or 'between urban areas and rural areas.' 'I would love to choose the urban' is awkward—use 'I would choose urban areas' or 'I would choose the urban area.' Suggestions: replace 'naturalized' with 'natural', simplify the 'between' phrase, and use 'choose' without 'love to' for a clearer preference statement.

× In my country, which is Taiwan, my country has a lot of naturalized landscapes and mountains, so I think I prefer the views from my own country.

✓ In my country, Taiwan, there are many natural landscapes and mountains, so I think I prefer views in my own country.

Repeating 'my country' is redundant. Use 'there are' to introduce existence (There be issue) and 'many' is a better quantifier than 'a lot of' in formal speech. 'Naturalized landscapes' is incorrect; use 'natural landscapes.' Also 'views from my own country' is acceptable but 'views in my own country' is more natural. Suggestions: remove repetition, use 'there are' to state existence, replace 'naturalized' with 'natural', and use 'in' rather than 'from' for location.