视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples with linking words. Avoid redundancy and correct article and preposition use (e.g., 'take pictures of landscapes', 'when I see').

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, when I see stunning scenery such as mountains or the sea, I often photograph it to remember the feeling. I also capture interesting streets and buildings because they often leave a strong impression on me.

建议: Give a direct answer then explain with contrasting details using linking words. Correct collocations (e.g., 'it depends on the situation', 'rural areas'), and avoid awkward phrases like 'let's have some'.

示例: It depends on the situation: I like both. For instance, I enjoy photographing sunny cityscapes because of the architecture and busy streets, while in rural areas I focus on natural scenes and small details, so I often use my smartphone to record them.

建议: Answer directly and improve grammar and clarity. Use correct tense and plural forms, and provide a brief reason for each preference using linking words like 'because' or 'while'.

示例: I prefer both my own country and other countries for different reasons. In my country I enjoy photographing traditional buildings because they reflect my culture, while abroad I like capturing different styles and scenes because they broaden my perspective.

× Yes, I really like to take a lot of pictures about a variety of landscape.

✓ Yes, I really like to take a lot of pictures of a variety of landscapes.

Use 'of' to indicate what the pictures are of. 'About' is incorrect here. Also 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'a variety of' and indicate multiple types.

× For instance, when I saw some stunning scenery, mountains, sea or streets or even buildings, I would capture those things and this would leave me a strong impression.

✓ For instance, when I see some stunning scenery—mountains, the sea, streets, or even buildings—I capture those things and they leave me with a strong impression.

Tense consistency: the question asks about likes/habits, so present simple is appropriate ('see','capture','leave'). Use 'the sea' for a specific noun and change 'this would leave me a strong impression' to 'they leave me with a strong impression' to agree in number and use correct preposition 'with'. Also avoid repeated 'or' and use em dashes or commas to list.

× Well, for me it depends on situation.

✓ Well, for me it depends on the situation.

Missing article: 'the' is required before 'situation' to make the noun specific. This is a sentence structure/article error.

× In urban areas, let's have some sunny scenery, I would take photos.

✓ In urban areas, if there is some sunny weather, I would take photos.

'Let's have some sunny scenery' is incorrect phrasing. Use 'if there is some sunny weather' or 'when it's sunny' to indicate conditions. 'Scenery' is not used with 'have' like that; 'weather' fits better.

× Furthermore, when I go to rural area, there are a lot of things that I want to record in my smartphone and I would take pictures.

✓ Furthermore, when I go to rural areas, there are a lot of things I want to record on my smartphone, so I take pictures.

Use plural 'rural areas' or 'the rural area'. Use preposition 'on' with 'record on my smartphone'. Use present simple 'take' for habitual action rather than 'would take' which sounds conditional.

× Well, I prefer at least two.

✓ Well, I prefer both.

'Prefer at least two' is unclear and unnatural in this context. 'Prefer both' directly answers choosing both options. No preposition needed.

× In my own country there are lots of traditional buildings that I can watch and in other countries there are a lot of things that is very different from my country.

✓ In my own country there are lots of traditional buildings that I can look at, and in other countries there are many things that are very different from those in my country.

Use 'look at' or 'see' instead of 'watch' for buildings. 'Things that is' has subject-verb agreement error; change to 'things that are'. Clarify comparison by saying 'different from those in my country' to compare things, not the country itself.

× Both of these are gave me different understanding.

✓ Both of these gave me different understandings.

Incorrect verb form: 'are gave' mixes present and past; use past 'gave' alone. Also 'understanding' should be plural or rephrased as 'gave me a different understanding' depending on meaning. Use 'gave me different understandings' if referring to multiple experiences.