视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi geliştirilmelidir. Cümle yapılarında hata ve gereksiz tekrarlar var (ör. “I do” iki kez, “photo machine” yanlış terim). Cevabı 2-4 cümlede tutup, daha doğal bağlaçlar kullanın ve örnek verin. Öneriler: (1) ‘‘photo machine’’ yerine ‘‘camera’’ kullanın, (2) tekrarları azaltın, (3) galeri/tarzdan kısa bir örnek verin ve bağlaçlarla akışı iyileştirin.

示例: Yes, I love taking photos of different views. I often photograph landscapes and street scenes and have hundreds of pictures in my gallery. For example, I recently captured a colorful sunset at the park, which I edited and shared with friends. I’m also planning to buy a new camera to improve my shots.

建议: Cümle yapısı ve dilbilgisi hataları var (“charming me” yanlış kullanım). Yanıt daha kesin bir konu cümlesiyle başlamalı ve ardından nedenlerinizi iki kısa destekleyici cümleyle açıklamalısınız. Bağlaçlar (because, so, for example) kullanarak mantığı netleştirin ve spesifik örnek verin (ör. gece ışıkları, mimari).

示例: I prefer urban views to rural ones because I find city life more exciting. For example, I enjoy photographing architecture, busy streets and neon lights at night. These scenes give me varied subjects and interesting contrasts that I don’t usually find in the countryside.

建议: Zaman uyumları ve kelime seçimi düzeltilmeli (“were always my hobby”, “a lot of place”). Cevap daha doğal hale getirilmeli: konu cümlesiyle başlayıp nedenleri ve spesifik bir plan (Edinburgh) kısa ve doğru zaman kullanımıyla verilmeli. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrarlar azaltılmalı.

示例: I prefer taking photos in other countries because I love discovering new places and cultures. For example, next year I hope to visit Edinburgh, which has always been a dream destination for me, as its historic streets and castles offer many great photo opportunities.

× I have a lot of photo in my gallery.

✓ I have a lot of photos in my gallery.

'Photo' should be plural after 'a lot of' because 'a lot of' is followed by a plural countable noun when referring to many items. Use 'photos' to match number agreement.

× I'm also planning to buy a photo machine.

✓ I'm also planning to buy a camera.

'Photo machine' is not natural English; the correct noun is 'camera'. This is a vocabulary/word choice issue; also 'camera' is singular and matches 'a'.

× I always prefer urban areas over rural areas because the city life always charming me and also I love taking pictures of city experiences.

✓ I always prefer urban areas to rural areas because city life always charms me, and I also love taking pictures of urban scenes.

Use 'prefer ... to ...' not 'prefer ... over ...' for clarity; 'city life always charming me' is missing a finite verb — use 'charms me' (third person singular present). 'City experiences' is awkward; 'urban scenes' or 'city scenes' is more natural.

× I always prefer other countries because traveling new places were always my hobby and next year I really wanted to go Edinburgh because it's my dream and there are a lot of place to take pictures.

✓ I always prefer other countries because travelling to new places has always been my hobby, and next year I really want to go to Edinburgh because it's my dream and there are a lot of places to take pictures.

Multiple tense and form issues: use 'travelling to new places' and present perfect 'has always been' to show a continuing hobby. 'I really wanted' should be 'I really want' for a future plan. Add preposition 'to Edinburgh'. 'A lot of place' should be plural 'a lot of places'.