视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (verb forms, articles), and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific example to make it more vivid and use linking words for coherence.

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views because I’m passionate about photography. For example, when I see a colorful sunset or an interesting street scene, I immediately take out my camera to capture it. I especially like photos that show natural light and strong contrasts.

建议: Answer directly, use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, prepositions), and give specific reasons with linking words. Keep it concise: 2–4 sentences and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer natural beauty and peaceful scenery. For instance, when I visit my village I enjoy the green fields and quiet roads, which are more relaxing than busy city streets.

建议: Give a clear, fluent answer with fewer hesitations. Use proper sentence structure and more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'picturesque' instead of 'eye-catching'). Provide one specific reason and an example or comparison to make it convincing.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because Bangladesh has many picturesque landscapes, such as rivers and green countryside. For example, tourists often visit the Sundarbans and Rangamati for their unique scenery, which makes me proud of my country’s natural beauty.

× Yes I do I love taking picture of different views because of I'm a photo photo lover boy that's why I love taking picture and whenever I see an eye-catching scenario that time I open my camera or cell phone then I taking pictures.

✓ Yes, I do. I love taking pictures of different views because I'm a photography lover; that's why I love taking pictures, and whenever I see an eye-catching scene I open my camera or cell phone and take pictures.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural when referring to the activity generally ('taking pictures') and 'photo photo lover boy' is ungrammatical and redundant. 'Because of I'm' is incorrect — use 'because I am' or 'because I'm'. 'Scenario' is awkward; 'scene' or 'view' is better. 'Then I taking pictures' uses wrong verb form; use base verb 'take' after auxiliary omission. Suggestion: use plural for countable instances, remove redundancies, use correct clause connectors (because), and use correct verb forms.

× Actually, I'm prefer Bill in rural area because it's very beautiful and also eye-catching scenarios, natural beauty available in rural areas.

✓ Actually, I prefer being in rural areas because they are very beautiful and have many eye-catching scenes and natural beauty.

Errors: 'I'm prefer' incorrectly uses present continuous with a stative verb; use simple present 'I prefer' (Modal/verb usage overlap). 'Bill' seems incorrect word; likely 'still' or removed. 'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. 'It's' singular doesn't match plural. Suggestion: use simple present for preferences, correct or remove wrong words, match singular/plural.

× Uh, when I see and when I going to our village, village area, then I enjoyed a lot.

✓ When I go to my village area, I enjoy it a lot.

Errors: 'when I see and when I going' mixes present simple and present participle; correct is 'when I go' (present simple for habitual action). 'I enjoyed a lot' is past tense but context is habitual; use present 'I enjoy a lot.' Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habitual actions and correct verb forms ('go', 'enjoy').

× Uh, actually, I prefer being in my own country, uh, because, uh, uh, you know that Bangladesh is a natural beauty country, uh, in everywhere the I catching scenery available and also there's tourism country.

✓ Actually, I prefer being in my own country because Bangladesh is a naturally beautiful country; everywhere beautiful scenery is available, and it is also a tourist country.

Errors: 'natural beauty country' incorrect adjective order; use 'naturally beautiful country' or 'country of natural beauty'. 'In everywhere the I catching scenery available' is ungrammatical word order and wrong forms; correct to 'everywhere beautiful scenery is available'. 'There's tourism country' is incorrect; use 'it is also a tourist country.' Suggestion: use correct adjective/adverb forms and proper word order, and choose correct noun forms ('tourist country').

× Every foreigner come here for tourism.

✓ Foreigners come here for tourism.

Errors: 'Every foreigner come' has subject-verb agreement issue and article usage: with plural subject 'foreigners' use 'come' or with 'every' use singular verb 'comes' as in 'Every foreigner comes'. Simpler: 'Foreigners come here for tourism.' Suggestion: choose correct subject form and match verb number.