打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear, well-organized, and within the five-sentence limit. You give a direct opinion, reasons, and a balanced comparison using linking words such as “mainly because” and “that said.” However, “collect it” is incorrect in this context; use “correct it” or “delete it.” You could also make the final sentence slightly more concise.

示例: I definitely prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient. I can write a lot in a short time, and I can easily correct mistakes. However, I still enjoy handwriting when I’m taking short notes or writing something personal because it feels more natural.

建议: You respond directly and provide relevant, specific examples of how you use your laptop. The answer is coherent and uses appropriate linking language. However, the opening “Not every single day, however” sounds slightly awkward; begin with “Not every day, but I use my laptop quite regularly.” Also, “easier on my hand” is understandable, but “more comfortable for my hands” sounds more natural.

示例: I don’t type on a keyboard every day, but I use my laptop quite regularly, especially for studying and IELTS practice. I usually type essays, search for information, and practise my English. For longer tasks, I prefer a physical keyboard because it’s more comfortable for my hands.

建议: The answer has a clear timeline and useful supporting details, but there are two serious grammar and completion problems. In “often had to look down,” the subject “I” is missing, and the final sentence is incomplete: “now type in almost” should be replaced with a complete phrase such as “now I can type almost without looking at the keys.” Add a comma before “and” in the final sentence to improve clarity.

示例: I first learned the basics of typing when I was around 12 or 13, mainly by using computers at school. At first, I was quite slow and often had to look down at the keyboard. However, with regular practice, I gradually became faster and more confident. Now I can type almost without looking at the keys.

建议: You provide a direct answer, a specific example, and a useful description of your practice methods. The main weakness is the incomplete final sentence: “The more I practice, the more accurate and” needs a second adjective or a complete ending, such as “the more accurate and efficient my typing becomes.” You could also vary the vocabulary by using “typing accuracy” and “typing speed” instead of repeating “type” and “mistakes.”

示例: I improve my typing by using my keyboard regularly. For example, I type IELTS answers and short paragraphs on my laptop while trying to increase my speed and reduce errors. I also practise using all my fingers correctly. The more I practise, the more accurate and efficient my typing becomes.

× In the beginning, it was quite slow and often had to look down at the keyboard.

✓ In the beginning, I was quite slow and often had to look down at the keyboard.

The subject of the second clause is missing. The person who had to look down was I, so I should be used as the subject of both clauses. Make sure every complete clause has a clear subject and verb.

× However, with regular practice I gradually became faster and more confident and now type in almost.

✓ However, with regular practice, I gradually became faster and more confident, and I can now type almost without looking at the keyboard.

The original sentence ends with an incomplete phrase: type in almost. The adverb almost needs to modify a complete expression, such as without looking at the keyboard. Also, repeating I before can makes the sentence clearer. Avoid ending a sentence with an unfinished phrase.

× The more I practice, the more accurate and.

✓ The more I practice, the more accurate and efficient my typing becomes.

The second part of the comparative structure is incomplete. The pattern the more..., the more... requires a complete clause. Add a subject, my typing, and a verb, becomes, after the adjectives accurate and efficient.