打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答直接表达了偏好，也给出了两个理由，但有较多语法和搭配错误，例如“faster that I send”应改为“it is faster for sending messages”，“lots of information are more easier”应改为“typing a lot of information is easier”。“with lots of papers and pens”表达不够自然，可以改为“because I do not need paper and pens”。建议使用“because”和“also”连接理由，并加入一个具体场景，使答案更自然、有效。

示例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient, especially when I need to send messages. Also, typing is much easier when I have to write a lot of information for my studies or work, since I do not need to carry paper and pens.

建议: 答案基本回答了问题，但“used”时态错误，应使用现在时“use”；“Certainly I used my laptop”不自然，可以说“Certainly, I use my laptop every day”。最后一句没有完成，影响连贯性和有效性。建议明确说明使用笔记本的具体用途，并用“because”补充原因，控制在2至3个完整句子内。

示例: I use a laptop every day rather than a desktop computer. I mainly use it for doing homework, browsing the internet, and playing games with my friends. I prefer it because it is portable and more comfortable than writing everything by hand.

建议: 答案提供了明确时间“primary school”，并补充了电脑课和练习方式，内容较完整。不过，“back to my primary school”应改为“when I was in primary school”，“use the keyboards more fluently”搭配不自然，应该说“type more fluently”。此外，“then I can make more exercise”时态和表达错误，应改为“After that, I practised by doing homework and playing video games”。建议按照“时间—学习经历—后续练习”的顺序组织答案。

示例: I first learned to type when I was in primary school. We had regular computer classes, where I learned the basics of using a keyboard. After that, I improved my skills by doing homework and playing computer games.

建议: 答案结构较清楚，使用了“First of all”和“Secondly”来连接两个方法，这是优点。但“search some typing exercise”应改为“find typing exercises”，“train in every day”应改为“practise every day”，“use the keyboard fluency”应改为“use the keyboard quickly and accurately”。最后一句略显冗长且不够自然。建议补充具体练习目标，例如提高打字速度或减少拼写错误，并确保句子完整。

示例: I improve my typing in several ways. First, I practise with online typing exercises and games every day, which helps me type faster and make fewer mistakes. I also play computer games because they require quick and accurate keyboard movements.

× I prefer typing because typing is more comfortable and faster that I send a message to whoever I want.

✓ I prefer typing because typing is more comfortable and faster than sending messages to whoever I want.

比较级 faster 后面应使用 than，而不是 that。比较时，than 后面通常接名词、代词或动名词短语，因此 send 应改为 sending。

× Also, for typing lots of information are more easier than handwriting with lots of papers and pens when I am studying or working.

✓ Also, typing lots of information is easier than handwriting when I am studying or working.

句子的主语是动名词短语 typing lots of information，整体看作单数，所以谓语应使用 is，而不是 are。

× Also, for typing lots of information are more easier than handwriting with lots of papers and pens when I am studying or working.

✓ Also, typing lots of information is easier than handwriting when I am studying or working.

easier 本身已经是 easy 的比较级，不能再加 more。应使用 easier，而不是 more easier。比较两种方式时使用 than。

× Certainly I used my laptop every day.

✓ Certainly, I use my laptop every day.

every day 表示日常习惯，应使用一般现在时。use 是现在时，used 是过去时。

× I use the laptop's keyboard for doing homework or playing games with my friends and I realized that using computer for doing everything is more comfortable than that I use pen and

✓ I use my laptop's keyboard to do homework or play games with my friends, and I have realized that using a computer for everything is more comfortable than using a pen.

computer 和 pen 都是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。第一次泛指某台电脑和某支笔时，应使用 a。比较两个动作时，应使用 using a computer 和 using a pen 这样的平行结构。

× I use the laptop's keyboard for doing homework or playing games with my friends and I realized that using computer for doing everything is more comfortable than that I use pen and

✓ I use my laptop's keyboard to do homework or play games with my friends, and I have realized that using a computer for everything is more comfortable than using a pen.

more comfortable 后面的比较对象应保持结构一致。using a computer 应与 using a pen 进行比较，不能使用 than that I use pen。

× I first learned how to type on a keyboard back to my primary school.

✓ I first learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.

表示“在小学时期”时，应使用 when I was in primary school。back to 不能正确表达这里的时间背景。也可以说 back in primary school。

× I had lots of computer classes and I learned how to use the keyboards more fluently and the skills of typing, then I can make more exercise by doing some homework or playing video games.

✓ I had lots of computer classes, learned how to use keyboards more fluently, and then I could practice more by doing homework or playing video games.

前文讲述过去在小学学习打字的经历，因此后面的 can 应改为过去时 could。表示过去能够做某事时，应使用 could，而不是 can。

× I had lots of computer classes and I learned how to use the keyboards more fluently and the skills of typing, then I can make more exercise by doing some homework or playing video games.

✓ I had lots of computer classes, learned how to use keyboards more fluently, and then I could do more typing exercises by doing homework or playing video games.

exercise 表示具体的练习项目时通常是可数名词，应使用复数 exercises。make exercise 也不适合表达“做练习”，应使用 do typing exercises。

× First of all, I can search some typing exercise or typing games that I can train in every day.

✓ First of all, I can search for some typing exercises or typing games that I can practice with every day.

search 后面表示“寻找某物”时通常使用 search for。表示使用打字练习或打字游戏进行练习时，应使用 practice with，而不是 train in。

× First of all, I can search some typing exercise or typing games that I can train in every day.

✓ First of all, I can search for some typing exercises or typing games that I can practice with every day.

some 后面可以接可数名词复数，因此 exercise 应改为 exercises。这里指多种打字练习或练习项目，使用复数形式更准确。

× Secondly, I can play some keyboard video games that need to use the keyboard fluency and make a lot of actions and movements.

✓ Secondly, I can play some keyboard video games that require me to use the keyboard fluently and perform many actions and movements.

修饰动词 use 应使用副词 fluently，不能使用名词 fluency。副词用于说明动作进行的方式，例如 use the keyboard fluently。