打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use comparative structures correctly (e.g., “easier than”) and correct verb forms.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better and is quicker for jotting notes. For example, when I take notes in class I can write diagrams and underline key points more easily, which improves my retention.

建议: Good structure and clear reasons. Improve by correcting phrasing and removing small errors: use precise linking words and avoid unclear comparisons. Keep to two to three sentences maximum and include a brief specific example.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because it is more portable and convenient than a desktop. For instance, I can bring my laptop to a cafe or library and continue working without needing an external keyboard.

建议: Make the timeline and details clearer and correct grammar. Begin with a direct topic sentence stating when, then add one supporting detail about how you learned using correct tenses and reduced redundancy.

示例: I learned to type in first grade when my IT teacher introduced us to the keyboard layout and basic techniques. With regular practice and exercises at school, I gradually became confident and now can type quickly.

建议: Avoid fillers and be specific: state one or two clear methods you use to improve typing, use linking words (for example, by/when), and correct grammar. Mention frequency and a concrete practice activity to make the response richer.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes each day with online typing exercises and by typing notes while watching lecture videos. As a result, my accuracy and speed have steadily improved.

× you should looking for to find letter on a keyboard.

✓ you should look for the letters on a keyboard.

The modal verb 'should' must be followed by the base form of the verb, not an -ing form. Also 'letter' should be plural as keyboard has multiple letters. Suggestion: use 'should look for the letters'.

× But handwriting is more easier and convenient to write it and because of this I prefer handwriting.

✓ But handwriting is easier and more convenient to write, so I prefer it.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; do not add 'more'. Also 'convenient to write it' is awkward: use 'more convenient to write' and replace the repeated noun with pronoun 'it'. Suggestion: use 'easier and more convenient' and avoid redundant words.

× I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's more convenient and portable than a desktop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's more convenient and portable than a desktop computer.

The word 'desktop' used alone is informal; in this comparison it is clearer to use the noun phrase 'desktop computer'. This improves clarity. Suggestion: say 'desktop computer'.

× Laptops are lightweight and don't require separate access or like a full size keyboard, so I can work easily when I'm traveling or in a cafe.

✓ Laptops are lightweight and don't require a separate accessory like a full-size keyboard, so I can work easily when I'm traveling or in a cafe.

'access' is the wrong noun; the intended word is 'accessory'. Also 'full size' should be hyphenated as 'full-size' before a noun. Suggestion: use 'a separate accessory like a full-size keyboard'.

× I first learned to type in first grade during our ITIL Asan was the teacher showed me as the keyboard layouts and basic typing techniques with regular practice.

✓ I first learned to type in first grade when our teacher, Asan, showed me the keyboard layout and basic typing techniques, and with regular practice I improved.

The original sentence mixes tenses and has incorrect clause structure ('during our ITIL Asan was the teacher showed me as'). Use past simple 'showed' with a clear subordinating conjunction 'when'. 'Keyboard layouts' can be singular 'keyboard layout' for clarity. Suggestion: restructure sentence into clear past-time clauses.

× After that I became comfortable and can now type quickly.

✓ After that I became comfortable and could then type quickly.

Mixing 'became' (past) with 'can now' (present) creates tense inconsistency. Keep past or present consistently. If describing development leading to present ability, use 'became comfortable and can now type quickly' is acceptable but better to keep consistent: either 'became... and could' (past) or 'became... and can now' (present). Suggestion: choose one tense; here 'could then type quickly' keeps past narrative consistent.

× I improve my typing by doing it every day when I'm studying and, uh, watching some videos on a laptop.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day while I'm studying and watching videos on my laptop.

'Doing it' is vague; use 'practicing'. Use parallel gerunds 'studying and watching' with 'while' for clarity. Also 'on a laptop' is better as 'on my laptop' to show possession. Suggestion: use specific verbs and parallel structure.

× I usually, uh, use my keyboard on laptop, so it helps me to develop my this skill.

✓ I usually use the keyboard on my laptop, so it helps me develop this skill.

Missing article before 'laptop' and incorrect word order 'my this skill'. Remove filler 'uh' in formal responses. Use 'the keyboard on my laptop' and 'develop this skill' without 'my'. Suggestion: use correct article and pronoun order and remove unnecessary words.