打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, correct grammar, and give a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and informal phrasing. Also correct errors (e.g., “a modern teenager in my 20s” is odd).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can quickly edit and organize my notes on a laptop, and I can easily share them with classmates, which helps me study more effectively.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence and use clearer time expressions and linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., “some few years” -> “a few years later”; “gadgets” -> “devices”). Be specific about frequency or reasons. Keep to 2-3 sentences.

示例: I usually type on my phone and laptop every day. Since 2021 I mainly used my phone, but a few years later I started using my laptop too because it’s more comfortable for long tasks.

建议: Start with a clear, concise answer and give a brief supporting detail with correct grammar and a linking phrase. Use more precise phrasing: “in sixth grade” and avoid filler phrases like “to be honest” unless necessary.

示例: I learned to type in sixth grade. I don’t remember the exact age, but I started practicing regularly at school, which helped me build speed over time.

建议: Provide a clear method or steps you use to improve, use linking words and correct grammar. Avoid vague statements; give specific practices (e.g., regular practice, online drills, posture). Keep to two or three sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing exercises and using apps that track accuracy and speed. In addition, I focus on proper posture and regular short practice sessions to gradually increase my speed without making more errors.

× As modern teenager in 20s, of course I will choose typing.

✓ As a modern teenager in my 20s, of course I will choose typing.

Missing definite/indefinite articles and possessive: 'modern teenager' needs the indefinite article 'a', and 'in 20s' should be 'in my 20s' to show possession/age. Use 'a' before singular countable nouns and include 'my' for age reference.

× In my opinion, it's more easier and effective for me to express my feelings, what I'm thinking about or something else.

✓ In my opinion, it's easier and more effective for me to express my feelings, what I'm thinking about, or other things.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already the comparative form; use either 'more' with a multi-syllable adjective or the comparative form alone. Also 'effective' should be 'more effective' when compared, and 'something else' is vague—'other things' fits better. Added commas for clarity.

× From 2021 I started typing only on my phone, but in some few years I actually started typing additionally on laptop.

✓ Since 2021 I started typing only on my phone, but after a few years I actually also started typing on a laptop.

'From 2021' is awkward for a start point — use 'since 2021' or 'in 2021'. 'some few years' is incorrect; 'a few years' is natural. 'additionally' misplaced; 'also' works. 'on laptop' needs the article 'a'.

× Now I can type on both of gadgets and both of them is good for me.

✓ Now I can type on both gadgets and both of them are good for me.

'Both of them is' has wrong verb agreement: use 'are' with plural subject. Also 'both of gadgets' is unidiomatic; say 'both gadgets' or 'both of them'.

× To be honest, I don't remember actually when I started, but I can tell that I started using keyboard in my 6th grade.

✓ To be honest, I don't actually remember when I started, but I can say that I started using a keyboard in my sixth grade.

Word order: 'don't actually remember' is more natural. 'Using keyboard' needs the article 'a keyboard'. 'in my 6th grade' should be 'in my sixth grade' (write out ordinal) or 'in sixth grade'.

× Typing is very easy activity in which there is no need for taking a course for that or something else you just started to type on laptop or in on phone and just enhance your skills.

✓ Typing is a very easy activity in which there is no need to take a course; you can just start typing on a laptop or on a phone and improve your skills.

Missing article before 'very easy activity' — use 'a'. 'No need for taking a course' should be 'no need to take a course'. 'For that or something else' is unclear and unnecessary. 'Started to type' incorrect tense/structure — 'start typing'. 'on laptop' needs 'a laptop'. 'in on phone' is incorrect preposition sequence — use 'on a phone'. 'Enhance' is formal; 'improve' fits better in this context.