打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be careful with grammar and add a brief reason with a linking word. Use present perfect correctly and avoid redundancy. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing on my computer because it is more convenient and comfortable. As a result, I can finish my assignments faster and meet deadlines consistently.

建议: Good clarity and relevance. Improve by combining sentences with a linking word and adding a specific example of when you carry it to show practicality.

示例: I do most of my work on my laptop because it’s portable and easy to use, so I can work on reports while commuting or at a café.

建议: Correct tense usage and phrasing (use past tense or present perfect consistently). Use a linking word to show sequence and give a brief timeframe or method to be more specific.

示例: I didn’t take formal lessons; I taught myself by practicing regularly over several months, and gradually I became faster and more accurate.

建议: Good idea, but expand slightly with a linking word and a specific example of games or exercises to show concreteness and effectiveness.

示例: I usually play fast-paced typing games, such as online typing tests and rhythm games, which has helped me improve both my speed and accuracy.

× I have also complete my work before the deadline

✓ I have also completed my work before the deadline

The sentence uses present perfect tense ('have') so the main verb must be in past participle form. 'Complete' is base form; the correct past participle is 'completed'. Use 'have completed' to indicate a finished action with relevance to the present.

× I do most of my work on my laptop because it is very convenient and easy to use. I can also carry it with me whenever I go.

✓ I do most of my work on my laptop because it is very convenient and easy to use. I can also carry it with me wherever I go.

The common collocation is 'wherever I go' rather than 'whenever I go' when referring to places. 'Whenever' refers to times; 'wherever' refers to locations. Use 'wherever' to express carrying the laptop to any place you go.

× I never learned about how to type properly on a keyboard.

✓ I never learned how to type properly on a keyboard.

The verb 'learn' is followed directly by an infinitive ('learn how to...') not 'learn about how to...'. Removing 'about' produces the correct verb+infinitive structure: 'learn how to'.

× I taught myself by practicing regularly and gradually.

✓ I taught myself by practicing regularly and gradually over time.

The original is mostly correct but 'gradually' needs a clearer time frame when paired with 'practicing regularly' to fit natural English. Adding 'over time' clarifies the progressive improvement. The main verb 'taught' is simple past and matches the question 'When did you learn'.

× I become more comfortable and faster at typing.

✓ I became more comfortable and faster at typing.

The context describes a past change after self-teaching; therefore the simple past 'became' should be used, not the present 'become'. Use past tense to match 'I taught myself' and indicate the change already happened.

× I usually play games on my computer which has helped me to improve my typing.

✓ I usually play games on my computer, which has helped me improve my typing.

Two issues: a comma is needed before the nonrestrictive clause 'which has helped...'; also after 'helped me' the infinitive 'improve' or the gerund 'improving' can be used. 'Helped me improve' is more natural. The clause 'which has helped me improve my typing' correctly uses present perfect to show the effect continuing to the present.