打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid fillers, and use linking words to make your point clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, give one specific reason with a brief example, and finish with a short conclusion. Also correct basic errors (e.g., "I prefer typing" not "I prefer to typing").

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because typed text is usually clearer and easier to read. For example, when I type essays for school, my teachers can read them without difficulty, which helps me get better feedback. Therefore, I usually choose typing over handwriting.

建议: Answer directly, use correct comparisons and fewer repetitions. Use linking words to explain why and give one concrete detail. Avoid extra filler words and comparative errors (use "more comfortable than" not "very more comfortable").

示例: Yes, I type on a desktop every day because the full-size keyboard is more comfortable than a laptop keyboard. For instance, I can type for long periods without strain, which helps me work faster and more accurately.

建议: Respond with a clear time phrase and a brief supporting detail. Remove hesitations and correct tense mistakes (use "I started" not "I start"). If a location is mentioned, make it relevant and clear. Keep the answer within 2–3 sentences.

示例: I started learning to type when I was about nine years old. I practiced at school computer classes, and those early lessons have been useful ever since.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence, explain one or two specific activities that helped, and use linking words to connect ideas. Remove fillers and correct phrasing (e.g., "I code every day" rather than "I used to do a coding").

示例: I improve my typing by coding every day because programming requires lots of typing and constant practice. In addition, I sometimes use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× You have asked me a good questions.

✓ You have asked me a good question.

The noun 'questions' is plural but 'a' requires a singular noun. Change 'questions' to 'question' to match the singular article 'a'. Suggestion: Remove the plural '-s' when using 'a' before a countable noun.

× I prefer to typing because it is clear and crystal to understand the words.

✓ I prefer typing because it is clear and easy to understand the words.

After 'prefer' you can use the gerund (verb + -ing) without 'to'. Also 'crystal' is incorrect here; the phrase should be 'easy to understand'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer typing' and replace 'crystal' with 'easy' or 'clear'.

× When we uh use the handwriting, it may be a difficult to understand the words because of our handwriting problem.

✓ When we use handwriting, it may be difficult to understand the words because of our handwriting.

Do not use 'the' before 'handwriting' in general statements; 'handwriting' is uncountable here. 'A difficult' is incorrect; use the adjective 'difficult' without 'a'. The final 'problem' is redundant after 'handwriting.' Suggestion: Say 'use handwriting' and 'difficult to understand' and avoid redundant words.

× Typing is best over the handwriting.

✓ Typing is better than handwriting.

Use 'better than' for comparisons between two items; 'best' is superlative and 'over' is unnecessary. Also omit 'the' before 'handwriting' in this general comparison. Suggestion: Use 'better than' for two-way comparisons.

× Oh absolutely. I type on a desktop every day because it is very more comfortable than the laptop keyboard and it is too good then the laptop keyboard and when we typing.

✓ Oh absolutely. I type on a desktop every day because it is much more comfortable than a laptop keyboard, and it is also better than a laptop keyboard when we type.

Use 'much more comfortable' instead of 'very more comfortable.' Use 'than' for comparisons, not 'then.' Use 'a laptop keyboard' (not 'the') when speaking generally. Use the verb form 'type' rather than 'typing' after 'when we'. Suggestion: Replace 'very more' with 'much more', 'then' with 'than', and use base verb after 'when we'.

× Well, uh, when I was small, uh, at the glass pool from the age of 9, I start to type on the keyboard and it is very useful until now.

✓ Well, when I was small, at the computer lab from the age of nine, I started to type on the keyboard, and it has been very useful until now.

Use the past tense 'started' for an action that began in the past. 'Start' is incorrect. For an action that began in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect 'has been'. 'Glass pool' is unclear; 'computer lab' or similar is likely intended. Suggestion: Use 'started' and 'has been' for ongoing results; spell out numbers in speech as words if preferred.

× Umm, uh, to be honest, I am a computer student. I, I used to do a coding every day. That's so I improved my typing. Uh, that is the reasons why I improved the typing.

✓ To be honest, I am a computer student. I used to do coding every day, so I improved my typing. That is the reason why my typing improved.

Do not use 'a' before uncountable 'coding'. 'Used to do' is fine for a past habit. 'That's so' is awkward; use 'so'. Use singular 'reason' not 'reasons' when giving a single cause. Avoid 'the' before 'typing' when speaking generally. Reorder final clause to be natural: 'my typing improved.' Suggestion: Remove 'a' before uncountable nouns, use 'so' for result, use singular 'reason' for one cause, and prefer 'my typing improved'.