打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear, relevant and well-structured with a topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, vary vocabulary slightly and add a short linking phrase to make the contrast smoother (e.g., “whereas” or “while”). Also try to keep sentences concise to avoid slight repetition.

示例: I prefer handwriting because I keep a daily journal and writing by hand helps me connect emotionally with my thoughts. While typing is faster, handwriting feels more personal and helps me remember and reflect on experiences more deeply.

建议: Good direct answer with clear reasons. To improve further, add a brief linking word to connect the reasons and include a specific example or frequency to make it more concrete (e.g., how many hours or where you use it).

示例: I usually type on my laptop keyboard because I use my laptop every day for both my master's coursework and my job. For example, I often work in the library and at cafés, so its portability and quick setup make it far more convenient than a desktop.

建议: Your answer is concise and relevant. To improve, correct small grammar points (add articles: “a keyboard”, “a computer literacy course”) and include a linking word or a brief result to show how the course affected you later.

示例: I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in middle school because my school offered a computer literacy course for every student. As we practiced regularly in class, I developed basic typing skills quickly and could type accurately in later school projects.

建议: The idea is relevant but the answer has several grammar and clarity issues and is slightly repetitive. Make a clear topic sentence describing current methods you use to improve typing (practice, online exercises, timed tests). Use linking words and correct articles/pronouns. Be specific about activities and frequency.

示例: I improved my typing most when I was preparing for an important jury test, because I had to type all my essays and notes on the computer. Since then, I practise for 15–20 minutes daily using online typing exercises and timed tests to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because I keep a daily journal and writing by hand helps me connect emotionally with my thoughts.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I keep a daily journal and writing by hand helps me connect emotionally with my thoughts.

No correction needed for grammar: 'writing' correctly functions as a gerund (present participle used as noun) in the coordinating structure 'I keep a daily journal and writing by hand helps...'. Suggestion: keep as is; ensure clarity by optionally rewriting as 'and handwriting helps me connect...'.

× I usually type on my laptop keyboard because I use my laptop every day for both my master coursework and my job.

✓ I usually type on my laptop keyboard because I use my laptop every day for both my master's coursework and my job.

Error: incorrect form of noun phrase 'master coursework'. Correction: possessive form 'master's coursework' or 'my master's program coursework'. Use possessive to indicate the type of coursework. Suggestion: use 'my master's coursework' or 'coursework for my master's degree' for clarity.

× I learned to type on keyboard when I was in middle school because my school offered a Computer literacy course for every student.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in middle school because my school offered a computer literacy course to every student.

Errors: missing article before 'keyboard' (use 'a keyboard') and incorrect preposition/capitalization in 'Computer literacy course'. Also 'for every student' is acceptable but 'to every student' is more natural. Suggestion: use lowercase for common nouns and include the indefinite article: 'on a keyboard' and 'computer literacy course for/to every student'.

× I think the time I can master my typing skill was the time I prepared for my jury test because when I I took my journey I needed to type the my texts and writing on the computer.

✓ I think I mastered my typing skills when I was preparing for my jury test because, during that time, I needed to type my texts and other writing on the computer.

Multiple errors: tense inconsistency ('can master' incorrect with past reference), article errors ('my typing skill' should be plural or 'my typing skill' but 'skills' is natural), duplicated word 'I I', incorrect noun 'journey' likely meant 'jury', extra article 'the' before 'my texts', and awkward word order. Corrections: use past tense 'mastered' to match the past event, change to plural 'typing skills', fix 'jury test' (not 'journey'), remove duplicate 'I', delete extra 'the', and improve cohesion with a time phrase. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent and proofread for duplicated words and wrong words with similar spelling.