打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more natural and concise: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (use singular/plural and articles), and add a specific brief example to support the point. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s quicker and easier to correct mistakes. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can rearrange sentences and edit typos instantly, which makes my work neater and faster.

建议: Start with a clear main idea, then contrast briefly using linking words. Fix grammar (possessive and verb agreement) and be concise. Add one specific reason or example to strengthen the answer.

示例: I usually type on my laptop because it’s portable and lets me work in cafes or at home. However, I prefer using my desktop at home because its full-size keyboard is more comfortable and helps me type faster during long tasks.

建议: Provide a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence stating when you learned, then add a specific supporting detail. Remove repetition and incorrect phrasing. Use past tense consistently.

示例: I learned to type when I was in fifth grade. Our teacher took the class to the computer lab, and she gave us basic lessons on finger placement and practising typing exercises.

建议: Make the answer concise and grammatically correct: state your main methods, use linking words, and give a specific practice routine or resource. Correct vocabulary (e.g., 'finger placement', 'posture') and time expressions.

示例: I improve my typing by practising daily and following basic techniques my teacher taught, such as correct finger placement and posture. For example, I practice for about an hour every day using online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is much easier to correct our mistakes.

✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is much easier to correct my mistakes.

The speaker refers to their own mistakes, so the possessive pronoun should be 'my' not 'our'. Use singular first-person possessive to match the subject 'I'. Suggestion: Use 'my mistakes' when speaking about your own errors.

× If I make any error I can simply delete it or edit it.

✓ If I make any error, I can simply delete or edit it.

Missing comma after the conditional clause reduces clarity; also repetition of 'it' after two verbs is unnecessary. Place a comma after the conditional clause and use 'delete or edit it'. Suggestion: Add a comma after 'error' and combine verbs before the object.

× It is also faster and neater way which helps to make our note or writing our long documents.

✓ It is also a faster and neater way, which helps me make notes or write long documents.

Missing article 'a' before 'faster and neater way'; 'which helps to make our note or writing our long documents' is ungrammatical: use correct verb forms 'make notes' and 'write long documents' and appropriate pronoun 'me' or 'my'. Suggestion: Include the article 'a', use 'which helps me', and use parallel verbs 'make notes or write long documents'.

× Usually I type on my laptop.

✓ Usually I type on my laptop.

Sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. Suggestion: None.

× It is portable and I can work anywhere whether I'm at home or in a cafe.

✓ It is portable, and I can work anywhere, whether I'm at home or in a cafe.

Grammatically fine but needs commas for clarity. Pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'laptop'. Suggestion: Add commas to improve readability.

× However, I prefer my desktop.

✓ However, I prefer my desktop.

Sentence is correct. 'Desktop' singular is appropriate when referring to a single computer. Suggestion: No change.

× It's full size keyboard is more comfortable and help me work faster.

✓ Its full-size keyboard is more comfortable and helps me work faster.

Use possessive pronoun 'its' (no apostrophe). 'Full-size' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Subject-verb agreement: 'keyboard' (singular) requires 'helps', not 'help'. Suggestion: Use 'its', hyphenate 'full-size', and use 'helps' to match singular subject.

× When I was in class 5 that that was the first time I saw a desktop with keyboard mouse sensitive attached to it.

✓ When I was in class 5, that was the first time I saw a desktop with a keyboard and a mouse attached to it.

The repetition 'that that' is incorrect; missing articles 'a' before 'keyboard' and 'mouse'; 'mouse sensitive' is unclear and unnecessary. Add commas and proper articles and conjunction 'and' to list items. Suggestion: Remove duplicate 'that', add 'a' before items, and use 'a keyboard and a mouse attached to it'.

× Our class teacher used to take us on a computer lab and we learn from our class teacher and by learning in a class how to type on keyboard.

✓ Our class teacher used to take us to the computer lab, and we learned from our teacher in class how to type on the keyboard.

Use preposition 'to' (not 'on') with 'take us to the lab'. Verb tense should be past 'learned' to match 'used to'. Avoid repetition 'our class teacher'; use 'the keyboard' with article. Reorder phrase to be natural. Suggestion: Use 'to the computer lab', past tense 'learned', and include 'the' before 'keyboard'.

× I improve my typing by my one by following the instruction and basic typing techniques my teacher taught me such as finger correcting, placement and the posture of the finger.

✓ I improved my typing by following the instructions and basic typing techniques my teacher taught me, such as finger placement and posture.

Tense should be past 'improved' if referring to past learning; the phrase 'by my one by' is ungrammatical and removed. Use plural 'instructions'; 'finger correcting' is incorrect—use 'finger placement' and 'posture' without repeating 'finger'. Suggestion: Remove redundant words, use 'instructions', and use clear noun phrases 'finger placement and posture'.

× I practice regularly about 1 hours in a day during both classes and at home which help me to.

✓ I practice regularly for about 1 hour a day, during both classes and at home, which helps me.

Use singular '1 hour' not '1 hours'; add 'for' before duration and 'a' after hour. Subject-verb agreement: 'which helps me' (helps for singular noun 'practice'). Remove trailing 'to'. Suggestion: Use 'for about 1 hour a day' and 'which helps me', and place commas for clarity.