打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and vague phrases, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Also correct unnatural phrases (e.g. "more popular than nowadays" should be "more popular nowadays").

示例: I prefer handwriting. Although typing is more popular nowadays because of smartphones and laptops, handwriting lets me express emotions and personal style more clearly. For example, I often write short notes by hand when I want them to feel personal.

建议: Answer directly and avoid tense errors and fillers. Use present simple for daily habits, link the main point and supporting detail with a connector, and avoid grand generalizations like "for the humankind."

示例: Yes, I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use it for studying and writing essays. However, I still value handwriting for personal notes and planning.

建议: Give a clear time reference and a concise reason. Remove repetitions and fillers, and use accurate collocations (e.g. "primary school" and "IT classes" are fine, but "for the more than humankind" is incorrect).

示例: I learned to type in primary school during IT classes. The teacher taught touch-typing because it was an essential skill for studying and future work.

建议: Describe a method clearly and use past tense consistently for past events. Avoid awkward phrasing like "I provide typing skill a lot." Add a brief detail about a specific practice or result to make it more concrete.

示例: I improved my typing in primary school IT classes, where the teacher set timed exercises to increase our speed. Practising those exercises regularly helped me type more accurately and quickly.

× Well, I think although typing is more popular than nowadays 'cause everyone has smartphones or other digital devices, I still think handwriting can express more emotional information.

✓ Well, I think typing is more popular nowadays because everyone has smartphones or other digital devices, but I still think handwriting can express more emotional information.

Sentence has incorrect conjunction and word order issues (Grammar problem type 16 and 26). 'Although' and 'because' were mixed, and 'than nowadays' is incorrect order. Use 'typing is more popular nowadays because...' or 'Although typing is more popular nowadays, I still...'. Also replace informal 'cause' with 'because' and connect contrasting ideas with 'but' or use 'although'.

× Yeah, literally, I typed on the laptop keyboard every day, especially when I need to, umm, do something about studying.

✓ Yeah, I type on the laptop keyboard every day, especially when I need to study.

The verb tense is inconsistent (present habitual action) so use present simple 'type' not past 'typed' (Grammar problem type 6 and 27). Remove unnecessary words 'literally' and 'do something about studying' and replace with 'study' for clarity. 'Every day' indicates habitual present action so use present simple.

× Umm, But I think handwriting is still really important for the humankind.

✓ But I think handwriting is still really important for humankind.

Incorrect use of article 'the' before 'humankind' (Grammar problem type 17/22) and capitalization 'But' after pause should be normal sentence start. Use 'humankind' without 'the'. Also 'really' is acceptable but can be kept or removed for formality.

× I learned to use the keyboard when I was a primary school student and uh, we were having the like the IT classes to, uh, learn using the keyboard because, uh, it is literally a kind of important skill for the more than humankind.

✓ I learned to use the keyboard when I was in primary school; we had IT classes to learn keyboard skills because it is an important skill for humankind.

Multiple issues: tense and phrasing (Grammar problem type 6 and 26) and article misuse (Grammar problem type 17). 'We were having the like the IT classes to learn using the keyboard' is ungrammatical—use 'we had IT classes to learn keyboard skills'. Remove 'the' before 'IT classes' and 'the more than humankind' is incorrect; use 'humankind'. 'Literally a kind of important' is incorrect modifier use; use 'an important skill'.

× Uh, well, actually I improve my typing skill in the IT classes in my primary school.

✓ Well, actually I improved my typing skills in IT classes at primary school.

Past action should use past tense 'improved' (Grammar problem type 5). Also pluralize 'typing skills' and use 'in IT classes at primary school' for natural phrasing (Grammar problem type 1/11).

× At that time, uh, the teacher always forced us to type faster and faster.

✓ At that time, the teacher always made us type faster and faster.

Verb choice: 'forced us to type' is grammatical but sounds natural to use 'made us type' or keep 'forced us to'—main issue is clarity; however original structure is acceptable. Primary problem is word choice rather than strict grammar; still 'always forced us to' can be kept. Here suggest 'made us type' for natural collocation (Grammar problem type 26).

× So at that time, I provide typing skill a lot.

✓ So at that time, I improved my typing skills a lot.

Sentence structure and verb tense error (Grammar problem types 26 and 5). 'Provide typing skill a lot' is ungrammatical; use 'improved my typing skills a lot' to show past progress. Also pluralize 'skills'.