打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fill words (e.g., "and and"). Use correct verb forms and articles.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes correcting mistakes easy. For example, when I text or write an email I can quickly delete or edit words, which saves time and reduces errors.

建议: Give a direct answer (desktop or laptop) and support it with a clear reason. Use linking words (because, so) correctly, avoid repetition and improve collocation ("type on a keyboard", "use social media").

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use social media and study on my laptop. Because the laptop is portable, I can type comfortably anywhere, which is why I use it daily.

建议: Give a specific time period or age, then explain briefly how you learned. Use past tense correctly and provide one concrete detail. Avoid vague phrases like "not perfect time."

示例: I learned to type when I was about twelve at school. We had a basic computer class where the teacher showed us finger positions, and I practised regularly on simple exercises to get faster.

建议: Answer directly with methods you use to improve, using specific examples and correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, by) and avoid repetition. Mention measurable or concrete practices if possible.

示例: I improve my typing mainly by practising a lot on my laptop. For example, I use typing websites and regularly write messages on social media and documents, which has increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because when we are type a message so little mistakes we are mistakes are erased but and and I think they don't.

✓ I prefer typing because when we type a message, small mistakes are erased, and I think handwriting does not erase mistakes.

The original sentence has multiple structure problems: incorrect verb forms ('are type' should be 'type'), redundant words ('we are mistakes are'), and unclear clause connectors ('but and and'). This fits Sentence structure errors (ID 26). To improve, simplify the clauses, use the correct verb form for 'we type', remove redundancies, and connect ideas with appropriate conjunctions. Use commas to separate clauses.

× I type on a keyboard everyday because I use on social media apps.

✓ I type on a keyboard every day because I use social media apps.

The phrase 'use on social media apps' incorrectly includes the preposition 'on'. Also 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb) here. This matches Incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11) and also adjective/adverb choice (ID 13), but per instructions we only correct listed types; primary is preposition. Remove the unnecessary 'on' and separate 'every day' into two words.

× So when I type it in a keyboard is very easy and very easy to every application to do so that's why I use a keyboard everyday.

✓ So when I type on a keyboard, it is very easy to use many applications, which is why I use a keyboard every day.

This sentence contains awkward structure and repetition ('very easy and very easy'), incorrect preposition ('in a keyboard') and misordered phrases. It fits Sentence structure errors (ID 26). Improve by using 'on a keyboard', simplifying repetition, and clearly linking cause and effect with 'which is why'.

× Not perfect time. I learn to the keyboard because I am uh, many things to do so that's why I am not use a keyboard to perfect time.

✓ There is no exact time. I learned to use the keyboard because I had many things to do, so I did not have time to practice typing perfectly.

The student uses fragmented phrases and incorrect verb forms ('I learn', 'to the keyboard', 'I am not use') and unclear meaning. This is Sentence structure errors (ID 26) and Past tense issue (ID 5) since learning happened in the past; primary correction addresses structure and tense. Use past tense 'learned' and proper infinitive 'use the keyboard', and rephrase to convey lack of time to practice.

× I do improve improve my typing when I I too much use in a keyboard and more typing in social media apps and these things are improving my typing.

✓ I improve my typing when I use a keyboard a lot and type more on social media apps; these activities help my typing improve.

The original has repetition ('improve improve', 'I I'), incorrect word order ('too much use in a keyboard'), and wrong preposition ('in a keyboard'). Primary error here is Sentence structure errors (ID 26) and preposition use (ID 11), but per list we mark Incorrect use of the definite article (ID 17) is not primary; however the main fix restructures the sentence: use 'use a keyboard a lot' and 'type on social media apps'. Also remove redundant words and clarify cause-effect.