打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Bạn nói không tự nhiên vì nhiều tiếng ậm ừ và cấu trúc lặp; câu trả lời thiếu câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy bắt đầu bằng một câu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, tránh tiếng ngừng, dùng liên từ đơn giản để giải thích lý do và nêu 1 ví dụ cụ thể. Ví dụ: “I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient for me when communicating online.”

示例: I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient for communicating. For example, I often text friends and write emails on my phone or laptop, which saves time compared with writing by hand.

建议: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và lẫn lộn giữa desktop và laptop; có lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ sai (e.g., “over convenient”). Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp (desktop or laptop), sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn và dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” để mạch lạc. Tránh lặp và tối đa 3-4 câu.

示例: I usually type on my desktop at home because the larger screen and keyboard are more comfortable. However, I also use my laptop for studying when I’m away from home, and I use social media on both devices.

建议: Câu trả lời rất rối, nhiều lỗi phát âm/ ngữ pháp và không có trình tự rõ ràng. Bạn cần nói một câu chủ đề nêu thời điểm, rồi mô tả ngắn quá trình học với các chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tuổi, phương pháp). Dùng thì quá khứ cho thời điểm đã xảy ra và tránh lặp từ.

示例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. At first I had to look at the keys a lot, but after practising with online lessons and exercises I became much faster and can now type fluently.

建议: Trả lời chung chung và lộn xộn, nhiều tiếng ngắt quãng. Hãy nêu rõ phương pháp bạn dùng để cải thiện (ứng dụng, trang web, luyện tập hàng ngày), đưa ra ví dụ cụ thể và tần suất. Dùng liên từ như “for example” hoặc “for instance” để liên kết ý.

示例: I improve my typing by practising daily with typing apps and websites. For example, I use Microsoft Typing Tutor and online typing tests for 20 minutes each day to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Umm, I will prefer typing because, umm, another day most of people like uh, chatting on the social media and they use uh, telephones or laptop. Lost, yeah.

✓ Umm, I prefer typing because these days most people like chatting on social media and they use phones or laptops.

Use of 'will' is unnecessary for a general preference; 'prefer' is present simple. 'Another day' is incorrect phrase; use 'these days'. 'Most of people' should be 'most people'. 'Telephones or laptop' should be 'phones or laptops' for common nouns and plural agreement. Also remove filler words for clarity.

× Of course, I often type on my desktop because it's over convenient and I'm spend most of my time to other day to, uh, do my homework and study in my laptop. So, uh, I also use social media on the laptops.

✓ Of course, I often type on my desktop because it's very convenient, and I spend most of my time on it to do my homework and study on my laptop. I also use social media on my laptop.

Use present simple 'I spend' not 'I'm spend'. 'Over convenient' is informal/incorrect; use 'very convenient'. 'Spend time on' is the correct preposition. 'Study in my laptop' should be 'study on my laptop'. Use consistent singular 'my laptop' rather than 'the laptops'.

× My hands kills is will will improve while I type on the keyboard at the at the beginning time I have to seen a lot of on my keyboard to can find out where to can type so but now I can type it fluency.

✓ My hands were sore at the beginning while I was learning to type on the keyboard. I had to look at the keys a lot to find where to type, but now I can type fluently.

Many tense errors: use past 'were' and 'was learning' for past situation. 'Kills' is incorrect; use 'were sore' or 'hurt'. 'I have to seen' should be 'I had to look' (past obligation). 'to can find out' is ungrammatical; use 'to find'. 'Type it fluency' should be 'type fluently' using an adverb. Ensure past tense for past experiences.

× Having some app to improve typing skills, umm for example I often use umm, some apps on my laptop, although it's from Microsoft or I will, I will improve it when I umm apply the website.

✓ I use some apps to improve my typing skills. For example, I often use apps on my laptop, such as ones from Microsoft, and I also use websites to practice.

Sentence fragments and incorrect verb forms: 'Having some app' is a fragment; use full clause 'I use some apps'. 'Although it's from Microsoft' is awkward; better 'such as ones from Microsoft'. 'I will, I will improve it when I umm apply the website' is ungrammatical and unnecessary future; use present simple for habitual actions: 'I also use websites to practice.' Also use 'my typing skills' for possessive and clarity.