打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Reduce fillers (uh), correct grammar (e.g., 'let' → 'lets' or rephrase), and avoid repetition. Keep within 3–4 concise sentences: give a clear main sentence, one specific supporting detail, and a brief example. Use linking words (for example, therefore) to improve flow.

示例: I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is more convenient and lets me edit my thoughts quickly. For example, I can take notes on my phone or laptop anywhere without needing a pen and paper, so I save time and can organize ideas more easily.

建议: Fix small errors and reduce redundancy: correct word choice ('everyday' → 'every day', 'used to up' unclear, 'line typing session' unclear). Start with a clear topic sentence, add one or two precise reasons with linking words, and avoid starting sentences with 'And'.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I work on my laptop and it is more portable than a desktop. Moreover, the key layout and feel suit my long typing sessions, so I find it more comfortable and efficient.

建议: Eliminate hesitations and repetition, correct phrasing ('in middle of the school' → 'in middle school' or 'at school'), and be concise. Provide one clear time reference and one supporting detail about practice or effect, using a linking word for coherence.

示例: I learned to type in middle school when I took a basic computer course. During the classes and at home I practiced regularly, which significantly improved my speed and accuracy.

建议: Correct grammar ('session' → 'sessions', 'help' → 'helps', 'e-mail and later' unclear). Be specific about methods and results, use linking words ('for example', 'as a result'), and keep it concise.

示例: I improve my typing with short online practice sessions that teach touch-typing and keyboard shortcuts. As a result, my speed and accuracy have increased, so I can write emails and reports much more quickly.

× Usually I prefer typing uh rather than handwriting because it is more convenient and let me draft and edit my thoughts very quickly.

✓ Usually I prefer typing rather than handwriting because it is more convenient and lets me draft and edit my thoughts very quickly.

Grammar problem type ID:27 Subject-verb agreement error. The subject 'it' (referring to typing) requires the verb 'lets' in third person singular. Change 'let' to 'lets'. Also remove filler 'uh' for clarity.

× For instance, I can type uh, I can type notes on my phone and laptop anywhere without needing to carry a pen and a paper, which saves my time and.

✓ For instance, I can type notes on my phone and laptop anywhere without needing to carry a pen and paper, which saves me time.

Multiple issues: 2 Third person singular issue is not applicable here; main problems are article use and sentence fragment. Remove duplicate 'I can type' and unnecessary article 'a' before 'paper' (article error ID 22). Also 'saves my time and.' is a fragment and awkward; change to 'saves me time.' Finally remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: keep sentences concise and end fully.

× I use a laptop keyboard everyday because I work from my laptop and I'm used to up the layout and feel it is more convenient and portable than the desktop keyboard.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because I work on my laptop and I'm used to the layout and feel it is more convenient and portable than a desktop keyboard.

Errors: 'everyday' is an adjective; use 'every day' for frequency (Grammar problem type 6 Present tense/time expression). 'work from my laptop' is acceptable but 'work on my laptop' is more natural. 'used to up the layout' is incorrect; should be 'used to the layout'. Definite/indefinite article: 'the desktop keyboard' implies a specific one; better 'a desktop keyboard' for comparison. Overall: correct article use and word choice.

× And I find the keys are more comfortable for line typing session, so I prefer the laptop keyboard.

✓ And I find the keys are more comfortable for long typing sessions, so I prefer the laptop keyboard.

Original has wrong word 'line' and singular 'session' which is unnatural. Use 'long typing sessions' (plural) to indicate general experience. Ensure adjective 'long' correctly modifies noun 'typing sessions'.

× I learned typing when I was in middle of the school, uh, when I joined the because I joined the basic computer class course, I practiced regularly during the lesson and at home, which helped me to improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ I learned to type when I was in middle school. When I joined the basic computer course, I practiced regularly during lessons and at home, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

Problems: 'learned typing' should be 'learned to type' (verb + to-infinitive vs -ing; relates to type 8). 'in middle of the school' incorrect preposition and phrase; use 'in middle school' (11 Incorrect use of prepositions). Remove repeated fragments 'when I joined the because I joined'. 'basic computer class course' is redundant; use 'basic computer course'. Use plural 'lessons' for regular classes. 'helped me to improve' can be 'helped me improve' — both acceptable. Remove filler 'uh'.

× I improve my typing by doing short online practice session to learn the touch type technique and keyboard shortcuts.

✓ I improve my typing by doing short online practice sessions to learn the touch-typing technique and keyboard shortcuts.

Errors: 'session' should be plural 'sessions' to match 'short online practice' as repeated activities (1 Singular/plural issue). 'touch type' should be hyphenated as 'touch-typing' or 'touch typing' and use noun form 'touch-typing technique' (10 Verb in the present participle form). Also consider 'I improve my typing by doing short online practice sessions' for natural present habit.

× This regular practice help me to increase my speed and accuracy so I can type e-mail and later much more quickly.

✓ This regular practice helps me increase my speed and accuracy so I can type emails and later much more quickly.

Subject-verb agreement/present tense error: 'practice' (singular noun) with present simple requires 'helps' not 'help' (2 Third person singular issue / 27 Subject-verb agreement). 'e-mail' can be 'emails' (plural) and 'later much more quickly' is awkward; consider 'so I can type emails much more quickly later' for natural order. Removed unnecessary 'to' after 'help me'.