打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and fix verb forms and articles.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I remember things better when I write them by hand. For example, when I take notes in a notebook I can easily review and recall ideas later, which helps me study more effectively.

建议: Answer directly (Yes/No) and give a clear reason with one linking word. Remove fillers and unclear phrases; use specific details about work routine.

示例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day because I work long shifts in my restaurant. When I'm busy serving customers I usually write orders by hand, so I only use a computer occasionally for inventory or scheduling.

建议: Give a clear time reference (age or school level) and a short description of who taught you. Use correct past tense and clearer vocabulary; avoid repetition.

示例: I learned to type at primary school when I was about ten years old. My mother showed me the basics at home first, and then my teacher gave formal lessons at school to improve my speed and accuracy.

建议: State a clear method for improvement (practice, courses, online tools) and give a specific example. Use correct verbs and avoid unclear or inappropriate words.

示例: I improved my typing through regular practice during school lessons and by using online typing programs. For instance, I practiced for 20 minutes each day on a typing website, which helped me increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I will prefer the handwriting because I can remember what I writing in the book and I can come back to have a look what I write and that is really good movement for me.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I can remember what I write in the book and I can come back to look at what I wrote; that is really helpful for me.

Multiple errors: 'will prefer' is inappropriate for a general preference; use simple present 'prefer' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'the handwriting' should be 'handwriting' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22: Article errors). 'what I writing' uses incorrect verb form; should be base/present 'write' to match simple present 'can remember what I write' (Grammar Problem Type ID 8/10: Verb + -ing/present participle issues — choose 6 present tense issue). 'come back to have a look what I write' needs correct infinitive and preposition: 'come back to look at what I wrote' (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and 5 Past tense issue for 'wrote' because referring to past writing). 'that is really good movement for me' is unnatural; 'helpful' corrects word choice (Grammar Problem Type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Suggestion: Use simple present for general preferences, correct article use, use 'look at' for examining, and use past form when referring to previously written text.

× Not every day because umm, I, when I work uh, in my restaurant, I have to buy in hand.

✓ Not every day, because when I work in my restaurant, I have to take orders by hand.

Original has incorrect verb and expression. 'I, when I work' is disfluent; simplify. 'have to buy in hand' is incorrect word choice; likely meaning 'take orders by hand' or 'write by hand.' 'have' + infinitive is fine but 'buy in hand' is wrong preposition and verb (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and Grammar Problem Type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice). Also ensure subject-verb agreement and clear sequence; here present simple is appropriate for habitual action (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). Suggestion: Use clear present simple structure 'When I work... I have to...' and correct verbs ('take orders' or 'write by hand').

× It's not like keyboard or laptop because umm, we're very busy in the restaurant.

✓ It's not a keyboard or a laptop because we're very busy in the restaurant.

Missing articles before 'keyboard' and 'laptop' (Grammar Problem Type ID 22: Article errors). Present tense 'we're very busy' is correct; keep it. Suggestion: Use 'a keyboard or a laptop' for countable singular nouns and keep contraction 'we're.'

× I learn when I tie on a keyboard, when I watch how?

✓ I learned when I typed on a keyboard and watched how to do it.

Tense errors: 'learn' should be past 'learned' because question asked 'When did you learn...' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 'tie on a keyboard' is incorrect verb; should be 'type.' 'watch how?' is incomplete; use 'watched how to do it.' Suggestion: Use past simple for completed actions and correct verb 'type.'

× Because my mother did teach me writing on the keyboard and when I go to school my uh teacher, the second uh teacher teach me writing umm when I studying.

✓ My mother taught me to type on the keyboard, and when I went to school my teacher also taught me while I was studying.

Multiple errors: 'did teach me writing' is awkward and tense wrong; use simple past 'taught me to type' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 'my uh teacher, the second uh teacher teach me' has subject-verb disagreement 'teacher... teach' should be 'taught' (Grammar Problem Type ID 2/27: Third person singular/subject-verb agreement). 'when I go to school' should be past 'when I went to school' (Grammar Problem Type ID 5). 'when I studying' needs auxiliary 'was' and past participle/gerund form 'was studying' (Grammar Problem Type ID 10: Verb in the present participle form). Also pronoun and article use improved for clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Suggestion: Use past simple consistently for past events, correct verb forms ('taught', 'to type'), and include necessary auxiliaries.

× I improve my typing, uh, when I go to school when I was young because my teacher, they can poop. What I umm, thriving.

✓ I improved my typing when I went to school as a child because my teacher helped me practice and improve.

Tense inconsistency: 'I improve' and 'when I go' should be past 'I improved' and 'when I went' for actions in the past (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue). 'my teacher, they can poop' is unintelligible and grammatically incorrect; likely intended 'my teacher helped me' (Grammar Problem Type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice). 'What I umm, thriving' is incorrect structure; use 'helped me practice and improve.' Suggestion: Use past simple for past learning, avoid filler words, and use clear verbs like 'helped,' 'practice,' 'improved.'