打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Focus on clear grammar and concise structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using correct tenses and articles. Avoid filler words and correct common errors (e.g., "when I typing" → "when I type"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer handwriting because I type slowly and I’m not very familiar with the keyboard. For example, I often make typos and it takes me longer to finish notes, so handwriting is faster and neater for me.

建议: Keep the answer direct but correct small mistakes and add one brief detail to support your choice. Use one linking word to show reason and avoid repeating words ("lap laptop").

示例: I usually use a laptop because it’s more comfortable and convenient. For instance, I can work anywhere in the house and the keyboard is easier for me than carrying a desktop.

建议: Give a clear time reference and simplify the sentence. Correct grammar for age expressions and plural/singular ("at 11 years old" → "when I was 11"; "computer class" → "computer classes"). Add a brief supporting detail about what you learned.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 11 years old at primary school. We had regular computer classes where the teacher taught basic typing skills and practice exercises.

建议: Answer directly with a short plan or methods you use to improve, using correct verb forms ("to type" not "to typing"). Provide one or two specific activities and use linking words like "for example" or "so" to clarify.

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly in computer classes and using online typing exercises. For example, I do daily drills to increase speed and accuracy, and I check my progress with timed tests.

× Actually I think I prefer handwriting because I when I typing I will slow and I can't use key keyboard very great and.

✓ Actually, I think I prefer handwriting because when I type I am slow and I can't use the keyboard very well.

Errors: 'when I typing' uses incorrect verb form (should be base form after auxiliary or simple present), and 'I will slow' uses 'will' incorrectly with adjective 'slow' instead of 'am slow'. Also 'key keyboard' is redundant and 'very great' is wrong collocation; use 'very well'. Suggestion: use simple present for general habits ('I type') and the verb 'am' with adjective ('I am slow'); replace unclear noun phrase with 'the keyboard' and use adverb 'well' for ability.

× Well, I usually use the lap laptop because I think it's so comfortable and convenient.

✓ Well, I usually use the laptop because I think it's very comfortable and convenient.

Error: 'lap laptop' is incorrect word choice; 'lap' is unnecessary. 'So' is informal and less precise; 'very' is more appropriate here. Suggestion: use 'the laptop' or 'a laptop' and choose appropriate adverb ('very') for formal speaking.

× Actually in at 11 years old when I was in primary school because there are many computer class and teacher will teach us.

✓ Actually, at 11 years old when I was in primary school, there were many computer classes and the teacher taught us.

Errors: 'in at 11 years old' has incorrect preposition use; use 'at 11 years old' or 'when I was 11'. 'There are' should be past 'there were' to match past time. 'Computer class' should be plural 'classes'. 'Teacher will teach us' should be past 'the teacher taught us' to match past narrative. Suggestion: align tense to past, fix preposition and pluralization, and include article 'the' before 'teacher'.

× Hmm, actually there are many computer lessons and beginning lessons. We often use the keyboard to typing and improve our typing.

✓ Hmm, actually there were many computer lessons and beginner lessons. We often use the keyboard to type and improve our typing.

Errors: 'there are' should be past 'there were' to match past context. 'Beginning lessons' is unnatural; use 'beginner lessons' or 'beginning lessons' might be acceptable but 'beginner' is better. 'to typing' is incorrect after 'to' (infinitive requires base form 'to type'). Suggestion: use correct infinitive 'to type', match tense, and choose correct adjective 'beginner'.