打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it lacks concision and some natural phrasing. Avoid repeating ideas ("remember better" and "memorable" are redundant) and choose smoother linking language. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons, using a linking phrase like "however" to contrast preferences.

示例: I prefer handwriting for learning because writing by hand helps me remember information more effectively. However, I usually type because it is more convenient and faster, especially when I need to share or edit documents.

建议: The response answers the question but contains informal fillers and awkward comparisons. Remove fillers like "you know" and unclear phrases. Use one clear topic sentence stating which you use and give specific reasons with cohesive linking (e.g., "because", "so").

示例: I usually type on a desktop because the keyboard is larger and more comfortable for long typing sessions. I sometimes use my laptop for watching shows, but for work or study I prefer the desktop for its stability and better ergonomics.

建议: This answer is understandable but repetitive and unstructured. Begin with a concise topic sentence (approximate time), then give concise details about how you learned and improved. Avoid repeating phrases and use past tense consistently. Add a linking phrase like "afterwards" or "over time" to show progress.

示例: I first learned how to type in primary school during computer classes. At first I wasn't very fast, but over time and with regular practice I gradually became much more proficient.

建议: The answer is brief and informal and ends abruptly. Provide a clear method with specific steps and examples, and avoid colloquial fillers. Use a topic sentence followed by concrete practices and a linking word like "for example" to introduce examples.

示例: I improve my typing primarily through regular practice. For example, I copy articles or magazine passages into a document to practice accuracy and speed, and I also use online typing exercises to track my progress.

× Deep down I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember better and that way is memorable.

✓ Deep down, I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember better and that method is more memorable.

Use of 'that way' is informal and 'memorable' needs comparison marker 'more' to indicate greater memorability. Also 'method' fits better as a noun here. Add a comma after introductory phrase.

× But in reality I think typing is more convenient so I will choose typing all the time.

✓ But in reality I think typing is more convenient, so I choose typing most of the time.

Using 'will choose' implies future intention but the speaker describes a habitual preference, so present simple 'choose' or 'prefer' is appropriate. 'All the time' is replaced with 'most of the time' for naturalness; add comma before conjunction.

× I always tap on the desktop because you know, laptop is look kind of like a big version of phone, so you can just type it on your phone laptop.

✓ I always type on the desktop because, you know, a laptop looks kind of like a big version of a phone, so you can just type on your phone or laptop.

Use 'type' instead of 'tap on' for keyboards. 'Laptop is look' is incorrect; correct to 'a laptop looks'. Articles needed before 'laptop' and 'phone'. 'You can just type it on your phone laptop' is unclear; separate alternatives with 'or' and remove unnecessary 'it'.

× I use laptop for watching TV dramas, something like that, but desktop is more convenient.

✓ I use my laptop to watch TV dramas and things like that, but the desktop is more convenient.

Add possessive pronoun 'my' before 'laptop'. Use infinitive 'to watch' for purpose. 'Something like that' replaced with 'things like that' for natural phrasing. Add definite article 'the' before 'desktop' when referring to a specific device.

× It's hard to recall what exact time that I've learned how to type on a keyboard because you know, since the one I was in primary school, I just, I went to the computer class and that time I'm not good at, I wasn't good at typing, but from practice, day by day, I I'm good at typing.

✓ It's hard to recall the exact time when I learned how to type on a keyboard because, you know, when I was in primary school I attended a computer class. At that time I wasn't good at typing, but through practice day by day I became good at it.

Use simple past 'learned' for a past event and 'when' instead of 'what exact time that'. 'Since the one I was' is incorrect; use 'when I was'. 'Went to the computer class' better expressed as 'attended a computer class'. Maintain past tense 'wasn't' and 'became' to show change over time. Remove filler repetitions and add 'it' as object of 'good at'.

× Practice makes perfect. That's how I improve my typing.

✓ Practice makes perfect. That's how I improve my typing.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Provided for completeness.

× I mean, why want to improve my typing? I just learn.

✓ I mean, why would I want to improve my typing? I just learned.

The question form 'why want to improve' lacks subject and auxiliary; correct to 'why would I want'. 'I just learn' is present simple but context refers to past actions, so 'I just learned' (simple past) fits better. Modal 'would' softens rhetorical question.

× Like I just print a message or print or magazine and then type it on the.

✓ For example, I print a message or a page from a magazine and then type it on the computer.

Original is fragmented and missing objects. Use 'For example' instead of 'Like' for clarity, include articles 'a message' and 'a page from a magazine', and complete the prepositional phrase 'type it on the computer'. Avoid repeating 'print'.