打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and less tiring. For example, as a CSC student I complete many assignments and coding tasks on a computer, so regular use has made my typing efficient and accurate.

建议: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and reduce repetition. Give one clear reason, then add a brief supporting detail using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can carry it between classes and the screen size is comfortable for coding and writing reports.

建议: Avoid hesitations and long, unclear sentences. Give a concise time frame or process, then one or two specific details about how you learned. Use linking words like 'through' or 'by'.

示例: I learned to type gradually through daily practice during my computer science studies. Over a few years of coding and writing assignments, plus using my phone for messaging, my speed and accuracy improved significantly.

建议: Be specific and give a clear routine and examples. Use linking words ('for example', 'such as') and correct minor grammar (verb forms).

示例: I improve my typing by practicing daily for about 30–40 minutes, for example using timed typing exercises and typing games such as TypingClub or Keybr. This focused practice helps increase speed and reduce errors.

× My everyday task are related to typing on a laptop.

✓ My everyday tasks are related to typing on a laptop.

The noun 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to agree with 'everyday' and the plural context. Use plural for multiple regular activities; ensure noun number matches the verb 'are'. Suggestion: change 'task' to 'tasks'.

× I feel laptop are handy and are very easy to carry and therefore I use laptop more often and laptop size and screen is efficient for me.

✓ I feel laptops are handy and very easy to carry, so I use them more often and their size and screen are suitable for me.

Multiple instances of singular/plural mismatch: 'laptop' should be plural 'laptops' when speaking generally; pronoun 'them' and possessive 'their' must match the plural. Also 'size and screen' are plural and require plural verb 'are'. Suggestion: use plural nouns and matching pronouns and verbs when referring to devices in general.

× So yeah, I type on keyboard, laptop keyboard.

✓ So yeah, I type on the keyboard, the laptop keyboard.

This sentence lacks appropriate articles. While not a pure third-person singular verb error, the phrase 'type on keyboard' is ungrammatical; 'type' is fine for first person. Use definite article 'the' with 'keyboard' to indicate a specific keyboard. Suggestion: add 'the' before 'keyboard' and 'laptop keyboard'.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? ... I didn't exactly learn how to type on keyboard, uh, anywhere, but it's just I, I am a CSC student, as I told you so my daily work involved typing and so with practice I learned how to type.

✓ I didn't learn how to type on a keyboard anywhere exactly, but as I told you, I am a CSC student, and my daily work involves typing, so with practice I learned how to type.

Fixes include word order and tense consistency: 'didn't exactly learn ... anywhere' reordered to 'didn't learn ... anywhere exactly'. 'Involved' should be present 'involves' because daily work is a current habitual activity; earlier phrase 'with practice I learned' correctly uses past tense for the learning process. Suggestion: keep habitual present tense for ongoing work and past tense for completed learning.

× I didn't exactly learn how to type on keyboard, uh, anywhere, but it's just I, I am a CSC student, as I told you so my daily work involved typing and so with practice I learned how to type.

✓ I didn't exactly learn how to type on a keyboard anywhere, but as I told you, I am a CSC student, so my daily work involves typing and, with practice, I learned how to type.

Preposition 'on keyboard' is missing the article and should be 'on a keyboard'. Commas help clause separation. Use 'so' to connect clauses properly. Suggestion: include articles and commas for clarity.

× And my speed also increased because of typing on phones or typing on laptops. So my fingers move faster.

✓ My speed also increased because of typing on phones and laptops, so now my fingers move faster.

Maintain cohesive tense: 'increased' (past) followed by a present result 'move faster' should be linked with 'now' to indicate current state. Also combine 'typing on phones or typing on laptops' to 'typing on phones and laptops' for natural expression. Suggestion: use 'now' to show present result of past improvement.

× I didn't exactly learn how to type on keyboard, uh, anywhere, but it's just I, I am a CSC student, as I told you so my daily work involved typing and so with practice I learned how to type. And my speed also increased because of typing on phones or typing on laptops. So my fingers move faster. And yeah, I've never really.

✓ I didn't learn how to type on a keyboard in any particular place, but as I told you, I am a CSC student, and my daily work involves typing. With practice I learned to type, and my speed increased because I type on phones and laptops, so now my fingers move faster.

The original contains fragmented sentences and repetitions ('uh', 'I, I', 'And yeah, I've never really'). Combine clauses, remove fillers, and reorder for clarity and grammatical completeness. Suggestion: eliminate fillers and finish thoughts; use clear clause connections.

× According to me, typing can be improved by regular practice if one type on a daily basis for 30 to 40 minutes on a laptop, either using like a specified time for typing or playing a game which helps.

✓ In my opinion, typing can be improved by regular practice if one types daily for 30 to 40 minutes on a laptop, either by setting aside a specified time for typing or by playing a game that helps.

Use third-person singular verb 'types' to agree with 'one'. Replace informal 'According to me' with 'In my opinion'. Use gerund/relative clause 'that helps' after 'game'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'one' and use clearer phrasing.

× According to me, typing can be improved by regular practice if one type on a daily basis for 30 to 40 minutes on a laptop, either using like a specified time for typing or playing a game which helps.

✓ Typing can be improved by regular practice if one types daily for 30 to 40 minutes on a laptop, either by setting aside a specified time for typing or by playing a game that helps.

Modal/ability 'can' is used correctly but surrounding phrasing is informal. Removing 'According to me' and correcting 'one type' to 'one types' clarifies the modal statement. Suggestion: keep 'can' and correct subject-verb agreement.