打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は意味が通じますが、表現がやや不自然で冗長です。まず冒頭で簡潔な主題文を述べ、その後1〜2文で具体的な理由や例を示しましょう。接続語（because, so, therefore, for example）を使って論理を明確にし、語彙を少し多様にして自然さを高めてください。発音上の詰まり（“umm”など）を減らす練習も有効です。

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can type quickly and edit mistakes easily, which saves time when I write emails or reports.

建议: 質問の用語（desktop/laptop）が不明でも、落ち着いて説明すれば良いです。簡潔に結論（desktop or laptop）を述べ、その後一文で使用頻度や理由を述べてください。不要なフィラー（umm, uh）を避け、文法を整えて主語と動詞を明確にしましょう。例えば “portable PC” は “laptop” に言い換えると自然です。

示例: I use a laptop every day because I often move between home and university. The laptop’s built-in keyboard is convenient for taking notes and writing assignments.

建议: 答えは理解できますが曖昧で「umm」を多用しています。できれば具体的な時期（e.g., during university freshman year）を挙げ、なぜその時期だったかを理由と共に述べてください。接続詞（because, when）を使い、時制と語順に注意して自然な表現にしましょう。

示例: I learned to type in my first year at university because a professor asked us to use computers for assignments. Since then, I practiced regularly to improve my speed.

建议: 内容は良いですが文法と語彙が単純で不自然な表現があります（“missed a lot at typing” は不自然）。改善方法を時系列で述べ、具体的な手段や結果を示しましょう。また、接続語（first, then, finally）を使って流れを明確にすると良いです。

示例: At first I made many typing mistakes, so I practiced with typing games and online exercises. Over time my accuracy and speed improved, and now I enjoy typing quickly and correctly.

× I prefer typing because it's easy to.

✓ I prefer typing because it's easy.

The phrase 'it's easy to' is incomplete; the infinitive 'to' needs a verb after it. Remove 'to' to form a complete sentence: 'it's easy.' Use full structures like 'it's easy to type' if you want the infinitive.

× Enter the words rapidly and it's very easy to write words and sentences.

✓ I can enter words rapidly, and it's very easy to write words and sentences.

The original sentence lacks a clear subject and uses the imperative 'Enter' incorrectly. Add a subject and auxiliary 'can' to indicate ability: 'I can enter words rapidly.' This clarifies who is performing the action and matches the rest of the response.

× I'm sorry I don't understand desktop or laptop keyboard but I always use umm portable PC and that has keyboard.

✓ I'm sorry, I don't understand the difference between a desktop and a laptop keyboard, but I always use a portable PC that has a keyboard.

Pronouns/phrasing were unclear: 'desktop or laptop keyboard' needs 'the difference between' to make sense. Also use 'a portable PC that has a keyboard' to link the clauses properly. Include articles where needed ('a').

× I use uh use everyday that of keyboard.

✓ I use that keyboard every day.

The original sentence has redundant words and incorrect word order. Use 'that keyboard' as the object and place 'every day' after the verb: 'I use that keyboard every day.' Remove filler words and unnecessary repetitions.

× I don't remember clearly but I think that was umm university era of mine because it is introduced by professor to use a PC.

✓ I don't remember clearly, but I think it was during my university years because a professor introduced us to using a PC.

Tense and noun phrases were incorrect: use past tense 'it was' and the standard expression 'during my university years.' Use passive/active correctly: 'a professor introduced us to using a PC' or 'a professor introduced me to using a PC.' 'Introduce to use' is ungrammatical; use 'introduced us to using.'

× At first I missed a lot at typing, but I used typing game.

✓ At first I made a lot of mistakes when typing, but I used typing games.

'Missed a lot at typing' is incorrect collocation; say 'made a lot of mistakes when typing.' 'Typing game' should be plural 'typing games' if referring generally. Use 'when' to connect the activity.

× Then my typing is improved.

✓ Then my typing improved.

Use simple past 'improved' to describe a change that happened in the past. 'My typing is improved' is awkward present passive; prefer 'my typing improved' or 'my typing has improved' depending on context.

× It's very fun for me to type correctly.

✓ It's a lot of fun for me to type correctly.

'Very fun' is informal but acceptable; however, 'a lot of fun' sounds more natural. Adding the article 'a' is necessary before 'lot of fun.' Alternatively, use 'It's very enjoyable for me to type correctly.'