打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要更直接并保持简洁。开头应直接表明偏好，随后用1-2句具体原因支持。避免冗长或与题目无关的背景信息，注意时态一致和自然表达。

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange sentences, which saves me a lot of time.

建议: 回答已较明确，但可更简洁并补充具体情境或用途（例如工作、学习）。避免重复和笨拙的结构，保持一句主题句加一两句细节。

示例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day, mainly for studying and writing emails. I usually spend two to three hours a day typing lecture notes and assignments.

建议: 回答不够清晰且有语法错误。先给出明确时间（例如“at school”或年龄），然后说明学习经过与结果。避免口头语（umm）和碎片句，注意动词时态与语法一致。

示例: I started learning to type at primary school when I was about ten, because typing classes were compulsory. At first I was slow, but regular practice at school helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

建议: 回答需要更有条理，使用连接词说明方法步骤（例如练习频率、工具、目标）。避免重复且使用更准确的动词和表达。给出具体细节如每天练习时间或练习内容会更好。

示例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with a typing app that gives short articles and tracks my speed and accuracy. I usually practice for 20 minutes each evening and focus on correcting the keys I often mistype.

× Actually, before this examination I always preferred handwriting, but after this I must say that I fall in love with typing.

✓ Actually, before this examination I always preferred handwriting, but after this I must say that I have fallen in love with typing.

句中原用“fall in love”表示在过去到现在发生的变化，需用现在完成时表示从过去持续到现在的结果；将动词改为现在完成时（have fallen）更符合语境。建议：表示从过去到现在已经发生并仍然有效的动作时使用现在完成时（have/has + 过去分词）。

× In the past I would say I have never done that, but nowadays I am confident to say that I am typing on my laptop keyboard every day.

✓ In the past I would say I had never done that, but nowadays I am confident to say that I type on my laptop keyboard every day.

句首谈过去经历应使用过去完成或一般过去时，这里用'had never done'更准确。同时描述现在的习惯用一般现在时（I type），而不是进行时'am typing'，因为是频繁性的习惯动作。建议：表达过去经历用过去时或过去完成；表习惯用一般现在时。

× Honestly, when I was little my mother tried to teach me but I do not learn a lot.

✓ Honestly, when I was little my mother tried to teach me but I did not learn a lot.

句中描述过去发生的动作应使用一般过去时，将'do not learn'改为'did not learn'以保持时态一致。建议：回顾过去的事实或经历时，用一般过去时。

× But umm yes, after I started to learn in the school because it is compulsory and I could not typing so fluently but that.

✓ But umm yes, after I started to learn at school because it was compulsory, and I could not type so fluently then.

句中存在多处时态和形式问题：'in the school'应为'at school'，表示地点；'it is compulsory'若指过去应与前句时态一致改为'was compulsory'；'could not typing'应为情态动词后接动词原形'type'；句尾的'but that'无意义，可用'then'表当时情况。建议：注意地点介词(at school)、时态一致性、情态动词后接动词原形以及删除无意义短语。

× Just typing for one article and nowadays I'm using an app that could provide me a kind of articles and I just need to follow the vocabulary and the words that it requires me to tap and I just do it.

✓ I just type one article and nowadays I'm using an app that provides me with articles; I just need to follow the vocabulary and the words it requires me to tap, and I do it.

原句开头'Just typing'缺主语和正确动词形式，应为'I just type'或'I just type one article'。此外，'could provide me a kind of articles'应改为一般现在时'provides me with articles'以表达常态；'requires me to tap'可简化为'requires me to tap'，但需去掉多余重复的'just'。建议：确保主句有主语和谓语；表达习惯性动作用一般现在时；'provide someone with something'结构比'do provide someone something'更自然。