打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 全体としては答えは分かりやすいですが、発音のためのためらい語（"umm"）が多く、文法の一貫性（"writing by hand" と "writing by hands" の混在）や冗長な表現があります。改善点：1) ためらい語を減らし、代わりに短い沈黙や呼吸を使う。2) 主題文と補足の構成を明確にし、一文で理由を完結させる（最大5文）。3) 単数・複数や前置詞の誤りを直す（"writing by hand" が正しい）。4) 具体例を一つ入れて説得力を増す（例えば、ノートを使って覚える方法）。

示例: I prefer writing by hand because it helps me remember information more effectively. For example, when I take notes in class, writing them down helps me recall details later. However, I sometimes use a computer to share documents with my family or prepare typed materials.

建议: 答えは直接的ですが、繰り返しがあり構造が弱いです。改善点：1) まず簡潔にYes/Noで答え、その後理由と具体例を短く述べる。2) 冠詞や名詞の形（"a essay" → "an essay"）に注意する。3) 不必要な繰り返し（"so sometimes"）を避ける。4) 接続詞で文をつなぎ、流れを良くする。

示例: No, I don't type every day. I usually write by hand, but occasionally I use a laptop to create presentations or write an essay for school.

建议: 内容は伝わりますが時制や語法の誤りが目立ちます。改善点：1) 時制を一貫させる（過去形で統一）。2) 名詞句を完全な文にする（"In computer classes" を前の文に結合）。3) 語彙や語形（"teach" → "taught", "fastly" → "quickly"）を正しく使う。4) 具体的な例を付け加えるとより良い。

示例: I learned to type when I was a junior high school student in computer class. My teachers taught us many techniques, such as how to type quickly and how to make effective presentations.

建议: 改善方法は示されていますが、文法と語順の誤り、ためらい語の多用があります。改善点：1) 文を簡潔にし、主語と動詞の一致を確認する（"friends who are"）。2) 前置詞や不要な語（"for by"）を取り除く。3) 練習の具体的な方法（練習サイト名や練習時間）を挙げると説得力が増す。4) 接続詞で流れを滑らかにする。

示例: I improve my typing by practicing at home on my computer and using online typing exercises. Sometimes I also learn tips from friends who are good at typing and try to copy their fingering techniques.

× I prefer writing by hand because I am used to writing by hands and it helps me remember things better.

✓ I prefer writing by hand because I am used to writing by hand and it helps me remember things better.

'Hands' is plural and unnecessary in this idiom. The correct fixed expression is 'writing by hand' or 'writing by hand(s)' rarely; use the singular form 'hand' after 'by' to indicate the manner of writing. Suggestion: memorize idiomatic expressions like 'by hand'.

× However, sometimes I have to use my computer to, umm, work with my family.

✓ However, sometimes I have to use my computer, umm, to work with my family.

The sentence's word order is slightly awkward. Move the infinitive marker 'to' before the verb phrase 'work with my family' and keep 'my computer' singular to match 'I have to use'. Suggestion: place 'to' directly before the verb and keep consistent singular pronouns for possessions.

× No I don't. I usually write with my hand. Umm but sometimes I use my computers to make presentation or write a essay for school classes so sometimes.

✓ No, I don't. I usually write by hand. Umm, but sometimes I use my computer to make presentations or write an essay for school.

'Computers' should be singular 'computer' to match 'I use'. 'Make presentation' needs plural or an article: 'make presentations' or 'make a presentation'. 'Write a essay' requires the article 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an essay'. Also 'write a essay for school classes' is redundant; use 'for school' or 'for my classes'. Suggestion: ensure subject-possessor agreement and correct article use before vowel sounds.

× Umm, I learned it when I was junior high school student.

✓ Umm, I learned it when I was a junior high school student.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'junior high school student'. In past-tense context 'learned' is fine. Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns.

× In computer classes.

✓ In computer classes.

Sentence fragment lacks subject and verb; however if intended as a short answer it is acceptable. No article error if meaning 'In computer classes' plural. If intended as full sentence, expand: 'I learned it in computer classes.' Suggestion: combine fragments into full sentences.

× My teachers teach me a lot of technique, for example how to type fastly or how to make presentation.

✓ My teachers taught me a lot of techniques, for example how to type quickly and how to make presentations.

'Teach' should be past tense 'taught' to match 'learned'. 'Technique' should be plural 'techniques' to match 'a lot of'. 'Fastly' is not correct; use the adverb 'quickly'. 'Make presentation' needs plural or article: 'make presentations'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent and use correct adverbs and plural nouns.

× Umm I improve my typing skills for by I'm practicing in my house using my computers, but sometimes I learn it from my friends who is good at typing.

✓ Umm, I improve my typing skills by practicing at home using my computer, but sometimes I learn from my friends who are good at typing.

Remove 'for' and use 'by' + gerund 'practicing' to show method. Use 'at home' instead of 'in my house' for naturalness. 'Computers' should be singular 'computer'. 'Learn it from' should be 'learn from'. 'Who is good' must agree with plural 'friends' so use 'who are good'. Suggestion: use 'by' + -ing to describe methods, ensure subject-verb agreement and proper prepositions.