打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 답변이 직접적이지만 문법적 오류와 중복 표현이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하게 정리하고 하나의 주제 문장 후 구체적 이유를 하나 또는 두 개로 뒷받침하세요. 예: ‘comfortable for my eyes’ 대신 ‘easier on my eyes’ 등 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, ‘memorize’ 같은 단어 중복을 피하세요. 연결어(for example, because)를 적절히 사용해 논리 흐름을 명확히 하십시오.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it’s easier on my eyes. For example, when I take notes during lectures, writing by hand helps me remember information better than typing.

建议: 대답은 의도를 전달하지만 문법과 어순, 불필요한 말(umm, 중간의 마침표) 때문에 흐름이 깨집니다. ‘type on my laptop’ 같은 자연스러운 구문을 사용하고 문장을 2~3개로 나누어 이유와 빈도를 명확히 설명하세요. 또한 ‘I’m preparing for the exam’와 같은 현재진행형 사용을 자연스럽게 연결하세요.

示例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day to take class notes. At the moment, I’m also preparing for exams, so I practice writing essays every day to improve my writing skills.

建议: 응답이 불명확하고 문법 오류가 많습니다. ‘When’ 질문에는 시점을 명확히 제시한 뒤 간단한 배경을 덧붙이세요. 불필요한 단어와 모호한 표현(‘my thing’, ‘protested it’)은 제거해야 합니다. 예: ‘I learned to type when I was 10 because my parents gave me a laptop and encouraged me to practice.’

示例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. My parents gave me a laptop for my birthday and my mother encouraged me to practice typing every day.

建议: 내용 전달에 어려움이 있고 단어 선택이 부정확합니다. ‘installed a typing practice application’과 같이 정확한 표현을 사용하고, 어떤 연습을 하는지 구체적으로 설명하세요. 불필요한 ‘umm’과 반복을 제거하고 결과(속도 향상)를 간결히 표현하세요.

示例: To improve my typing, my mother installed a typing practice app on my laptop. I regularly practice with timed exercises and simple texts, which has helped me increase my typing speed.

× I prefer handwriting to typing because it is very comfortable for my eyes.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because it is very comfortable for my eyes.

No change needed. The preposition 'to' after 'prefer' is correct and 'for my eyes' properly indicates the benefit; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Also when I study UMM I'm taking notes because to it is very easy to memorize memorize.

✓ Also, when I study, I take notes because it is very easy to memorize them.

This sentence has multiple issues: incorrect tense and continuous form ('I'm taking' should be simple present 'I take' for habitual action), incorrect use of 'because to', and repetition of 'memorize'. Use 'them' to refer to notes. Suggestion: use commas for clarity and simple present for routines.

× Yes, I type my laptop every day.

✓ Yes, I use my laptop to type every day.

The verb 'type' is incorrectly transitive with 'laptop' as object; native phrasing is 'use my laptop to type'. Also 'type' as present simple is fine for habitual action; changed word order to sound natural.

× I type laptop to make class note during a while with taking the lesson.

✓ I type notes on my laptop during class while taking the lesson.

Original word order is confusing and missing prepositions/articles. Use 'type notes on my laptop' and 'during class' or 'while taking the lesson' for time reference. Use plural 'notes' for multiple items.

× Also this day umm, I'm preparing for the exam so I write. Essays every day to practice writing parts.

✓ Also these days, I'm preparing for the exam, so I write essays every day to practice the writing parts.

Use 'these days' for current period and 'write essays' as a continuous habit. Remove the period in the middle. 'Writing parts' clarified as 'the writing parts'.

× My thing when I was 10 years old because my parents gave me laptop as a birthday gift and my mom let me practice typing so my mom is told the typing.

✓ It started when I was 10 years old because my parents gave me a laptop as a birthday gift, and my mom let me practice typing and taught me how to type.

Use past tense 'started' for when it began. Add article 'a' before 'laptop'. 'Taught me how to type' is correct past tense instead of 'is told the typing'.

× Asian so I'm protested it through it.

✓ (Sentence unclear) Possible correction: 'I practiced a lot because I wanted to improve.'

Original sentence is incoherent. Likely intended to express practicing or resisting; provide a clear alternative: use past simple or past continuous to describe actions in the past.

× Umm as I missed earlier, my mom installed umm typing practice application in my my notebook.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, my mom installed a typing practice application on my notebook.

Use 'mentioned' not 'missed'. Include article 'a' before 'typing practice application' and correct preposition 'on my notebook'. Remove duplicate 'my'.

× So I usually practice typing umm national song called Agua and famous.

✓ So I usually practice typing a national song called 'Agua' and other famous songs.

Add article 'a' before 'national song', use plural 'songs' for 'famous'. Include commas or quotes for song title. Adjusted to make list parallel.

× So thanks to it my. Space is so quite fast.

✓ Thanks to it, my speed is quite fast now.

'my. Space' is incorrect segmentation and word choice; 'speed' is correct noun for typing speed. Place adverb 'quite' before adjective 'fast' or use 'quite fast'. Add 'now' if indicating result.