打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct grammar (e.g., “it helps”), and give one or two specific reasons linked with a linking word. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information and improve my spelling. However, typing is more convenient in modern life for speed and editing, so I sometimes use it for assignments.

建议: Make the response slightly shorter and more natural: open with a topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief example. Use linking words like “because” and “so”. Correct small errors (e.g., “different kinds of”).

示例: I usually type on a laptop because I go to university and it is easy to carry. For example, I create presentations and assignments on my laptop, so it suits my student life.

建议: Give a clear time reference and remove hesitations. Start with when you learned, then explain how and include one specific detail about the learning method. Use linking words like “then” or “so”.

示例: I learned to type a couple of years ago by watching YouTube tutorials. The videos showed correct finger placement and exercises, so I practised daily to improve my speed and accuracy.

建议: Provide a direct topic sentence about methods you use to improve, avoid unclear fragments (“I met”), and give a specific, coherent example. Use linking words like “for example” and “by”. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly and using online typing tests to track my progress. For example, I write an essay every day and complete timed typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because it's help, uh, it's help to improve our writing skills also.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it helps to improve my writing skills.

The sentence uses incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'It's help' is wrong: with singular subject 'it' the verb should be 'helps' (third person singular). Also 'our' is inconsistent with the speaker referring to themselves; change to 'my' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'it helps' and a consistent pronoun 'my'.

× But on the other hand, typing is better and according to modern.

✓ But on the other hand, typing is better and more modern.

'According to modern' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is to say typing is 'more modern.' This fixes word choice and completes the sentence. Ensure adjective 'modern' is modified by 'more' for comparison.

× I usually type on laptop keyboard because I go to university and it is easy to carry as compared to desktop and I make different kind of presentations and assignments which is easy to make on laptop.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I go to university and it is easy to carry compared with a desktop, and I make different kinds of presentations and assignments that are easier to create on a laptop.

Missing articles: use 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop.' Number agreement: 'different kind' should be 'different kinds' or 'different kinds of.' Comparative forms: 'which is easy to make on laptop' is awkward; use 'that are easier to create on a laptop.' Also use 'compared with' for comparison. These changes fix article use, pluralization, and clarity.

× Basically I watch some videos on YouTube related to how to type.

✓ Basically I watched some videos on YouTube about how to type.

The question asks 'When did you learn...?' so past tense is required. Change present 'watch' to past 'watched.' Also 'related to' is awkward here; use 'about' for clarity.

× So they, they teach me uh, how to type and how to improve your skills and ask me do uh, practice daily to improve typing.

✓ They taught me how to type and how to improve my skills, and they asked me to practice daily to improve my typing.

Maintain past tense ('taught', 'asked') to match learning context. Pronoun 'your' should be 'my' because the speaker refers to themselves. Also 'ask me do practice' is ungrammatical; use 'asked me to practice.'

× I improve my typing to write some essay and some assignments.

✓ I improve my typing by writing essays and assignments.

Use 'by' to express method (Incorrect preposition). Also pluralize 'essay' to 'essays' when used generally and use '-ing' form 'writing' after 'by' to show the action. This corrects preposition use and noun number.

× For instance, I daily write an essay on my laptop and I met.

✓ For instance, I write an essay on my laptop every day.

'I daily write' is acceptable but 'every day' is more natural; more importantly 'and I met' is incomplete and out of context — likely a fragment or false start. Remove 'and I met' to make a complete, coherent sentence. Use present simple 'write' for habitual action.