打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and use correct tense and concise structure. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your current preference, then add a brief reason and one specific example. Avoid filler sounds (umm) and grammar mistakes (use past tense for past situations).

示例: I prefer handwriting when studying because I enjoy the texture of notebooks and collecting attractive ones. However, now that I work in an office, I usually type for work documents. For personal notes and journaling, I still choose handwriting because it helps me remember better.

建议: Answer directly, correct grammar, and give a concise reason plus a future intention. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately and avoid repetition.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because it was more affordable for me. In the future, I would like to buy a desktop for better ergonomics and a larger screen, which would make long typing sessions more comfortable.

建议: Give a clear time frame and a concise reason. Remove hesitations and correct word order. Use linking words (because/so) to explain why you learned then, and give one specific detail about what you learned.

示例: I learned to type in high school when our teacher required basic computer skills. We practiced touch typing and document formatting because the teacher said these skills would be useful for future study and work.

建议: Be specific about methods and correct grammar. State your routine in present simple or present continuous, use specific resources (typing websites, practice exercises) and explain briefly how they help. Avoid unclear phrases like 'tap the contacts about the novel I read.'

示例: I practice typing on online sites like TypingClub or Keybr for 20 minutes each day to improve speed and accuracy. I also copy passages from novels to practice typing real text, which helps me with punctuation and rhythm.

× Umm when I was a student, I prefer handwriting because I like the texture of notebooks and I like to buy the gorgeous notebooks.

✓ Umm, when I was a student, I preferred handwriting because I liked the texture of notebooks and I liked buying gorgeous notebooks.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence starts with past time 'when I was a student' so verbs should be in past tense. Change 'prefer' to 'preferred', 'like' to 'liked', and 'like to buy' to 'liked buying' for natural past narration. Also minor punctuation added.

× But now I umm, worked at a company so.

✓ But now I work at a company, so I type more on a computer.

Original mixes past form 'worked' with 'now', causing temporal contradiction and incomplete clause. Use present tense 'work' to match 'now' and complete the sentence with a clear result clause. Also add an object to clarify the meaning.

× I type on laptop keyboard because I can't afford desktop so I didn't buy desktop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard because I couldn't afford a desktop, so I didn't buy one.

Articles are missing: use 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a desktop'. Also use pronoun 'one' to avoid repetition. Past tense 'couldn't' fits with 'didn't buy' for past inability to afford.

× But in the future I would like to buy desktop so I can type on desktop.

✓ But in the future I would like to buy a desktop so I can type on it.

Missing article 'a' before 'desktop' and use pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. 'Would like to' correctly expresses future desire; keep 'can type on it' for clarity.

× I type on laptop keyboard because I can't afford desktop so I didn't buy desktop.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard because I can't afford a desktop, so I haven't bought one.

Alternatively, if speaker means current inability, use present 'can't afford' and present perfect 'haven't bought' to show the purchase has not happened up to now. Include articles and pronoun 'one'.

× I think it was my in my high school period because at that time a teacher usually asked us to umm know how to use computer because for it is umm benefit for future use.

✓ I think it was during my high school years because at that time a teacher usually asked us to learn how to use a computer because it would be beneficial for future use.

Several errors: 'in my high school period' should be 'during my high school years'; 'asked us to know how to use computer' is incorrect—use 'asked us to learn how to use a computer'; add article 'a' before 'computer'; 'for it is umm benefit' should be 'because it would be beneficial' to express future benefit from a past teaching. Use past/past-future 'would be' to fit sequence.

× I will I will search for a website that can practicing my typing and sometimes I will tap the contacts about the novel I read.

✓ I will search for a website that can help me practice my typing, and sometimes I will tap contacts about novels I read.

Redundant 'I will I will' — remove duplicate. 'Can practicing' is wrong; use 'can help me practice' or 'for practicing'. Use plural 'novels' or 'a novel' depending on meaning; 'tap the contacts about the novel I read' is awkward—'tap contacts about novels I read' or 'message contacts about a novel I read'. Clarify 'tap contacts' if meaning contacting people.

× ...that can practicing my typing...

✓ ...that can help me practice my typing...

After modal-like 'can', use the base form verb, not the -ing form. 'Can practice' or better 'can help me practice' is correct. Using 'help' plus base verb keeps natural phrasing.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn to type on a keyboard?

Both 'learn how to' and 'learn to' are possible, but 'learn to type' is more concise and idiomatic for this question. No major error, just stylistic improvement.

× I will tap the contacts about the novel I read.

✓ I will contact my friends about the novel I read.

'Tap the contacts' is unclear and uses 'the contacts' without reference. Use 'contact my friends' or 'message my contacts' to be clear and use appropriate possessive pronoun. Also ensure tense consistency if referring to a current habit or future action.