打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Expand your answer with a brief reason and one specific example; use a linking word to connect ideas. Keep it natural and within 2–3 short sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember things better and slows down my thoughts. For example, when I take notes by hand at meetings, I retain more details than when I type.

建议: Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, article use) and be more specific about frequency and purpose. Use a linking word to add detail. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I work with AI tools and large datasets. As a result, I usually spend about four hours daily typing and testing models.

建议: Use a full sentence with correct tense and include a short supporting detail about what you learned. Use a linking word like “when” or “and”.

示例: I learned to type from a teacher at primary school when I was six years old. At that time, we practiced basic typing lessons and simple exercises to build speed and accuracy.

建议: Use appropriate verb forms and be specific about methods and frequency; connect ideas with linking words like “for example” or “so”. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

示例: I am improving my typing by practicing at home every day and following YouTube tutorials. For example, I do timed typing tests and watch videos that teach proper finger placement and shortcuts.

× I have time on the desktop keyboard everyday because I needs to work with AI and computer.

✓ I use the desktop keyboard every day because I need to work with AI and computers.

Errors: 'have time on' is odd for habitual action; use 'use'. 'everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb) — use 'every day'. Subject-verb agreement: 'I needs' is incorrect; 'I need' is correct. Also 'computer' should be plural or count noun with article; 'computers' is more natural. Suggestion: write habitual actions with simple present ('I use', 'I need') and separate 'every day' as two words for frequency.

× Learn it from a teacher in my primary school when I was 6.

✓ I learned it from a teacher in my primary school when I was six.

This sentence lacks a subject and the verb is in base form instead of past tense. The question asked 'When did you learn?' so use simple past: 'I learned'. Also write numbers under ten in words in formal writing ('six'). Suggestion: include the subject 'I' and use past tense for completed actions ('learned').

× I want to improve my typing through just typing at home and learn it from YouTube.

✓ I want to improve my typing by practicing at home and learning from YouTube.

Parallel structure: after 'by', use gerunds for both actions ('practicing' and 'learning'). 'Just typing' is informal and vague; 'practicing' is clearer. Also use 'learning from YouTube' rather than 'learn it from YouTube'. Suggestion: keep verb forms parallel and use gerunds after preposition 'by' for methods of improvement.