打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Jawaban perlu lebih alami, tata bahasa benar, dan detail lebih spesifik. Hindari frasa yang tidak jelas seperti "material of my run". Mulailah dengan kalimat topik langsung, lalu jelaskan alasan dengan detail konkretnya dan kaitkan dengan contoh. Jaga jawaban tidak lebih dari 5 kalimat dan gunakan kata penghubung sederhana jika menambah detail.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I remember information better when I write by hand. For example, when I take notes in class, writing slowly helps me process and retain the ideas. Because of this, I often rewrite important points after a lesson to review them.

建议: Jawaban berulang dan tata bahasa salah. Jawab langsung apakah Anda menggunakan desktop, laptop, or both, lalu berikan alasan singkat dan spesifik. Gunakan satu atau dua kalimat tambahan dengan konektor untuk kejelasan.

示例: I use both a desktop and a laptop keyboard every day because I do office work at home and sometimes I work while traveling. I usually use my desktop for heavy tasks and my laptop when I need to work in a café or on the go.

建议: Jawaban tidak jelas dan hampir tidak bisa dimengerti. Perbaiki dengan menyatakan waktu (mis. usia atau tahun) dan menjelaskan bagaimana Anda belajar (kursus, latihan mandiri, game). Gunakan kalimat sederhana dan urutkan informasi secara logis.

示例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old by taking a basic computer class at school. After that, I practiced regularly with online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

建议: Jawaban agak aneh dan kurang spesifik; berikan metode latihan konkret (latihan rutin, situs latihan, latihan kecepatan, latihan akurasi) dan jelaskan frekuensi dan hasil yang ingin dicapai. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing for 20 minutes each day using an online typing tutor to work on accuracy and speed. I also type short stories and emails to apply what I learn, and I track my progress weekly to see improvements.

× I prefer to handwriting because when I write with my hand, I can remember the material of my run.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I write by hand, I can remember the material I read.

'Prefer to handwriting' is incorrect because after 'prefer' when talking about a general preference use the noun or gerund form: 'prefer handwriting' or 'prefer to handwrite'. 'Handwriting' is a noun; 'handwrite' is a verb. Also 'write with my hand' is unnatural; use 'write by hand'. 'material of my run' is unclear and likely meant 'material I read' or 'material from my reading'. Improve by choosing correct form: 'I prefer handwriting' or 'I prefer to handwrite', and replace unclear phrase with 'material I read'.

× Yes, I type on the desktop and laptop keyboard every day because I do my work. I do my job the time in my desktop and laptop keyboard.

✓ Yes, I type on desktop and laptop keyboards every day because I do my work on them.

Use plural 'keyboards' when referring to both desktop and laptop keyboards (singular/plural issue). Also 'on the desktop and laptop keyboard' is awkward; remove definite article 'the' and use plural. 'I do my job the time in my desktop and laptop keyboard' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I do my work on them' to indicate using the keyboards. Use 'work' rather than repeating 'job' and avoid redundant phrasing.

× I was on typing laptop prison and calls and I do all the deduct to learn how to type on the keyboard.

✓ I learned to type on a laptop using online lessons and practice.

The original sentence uses incorrect words ('prison', 'calls', 'deduct') and wrong tense/structure. Use simple past 'learned' to answer 'When did you learn...'. Clarify method: 'using online lessons and practice' or 'at school' depending on intended meaning. Keep tense consistent and use correct vocabulary.

× I improve my typing by writing a story about my wedding day and I type a legend story.

✓ I improve my typing by writing stories, such as one about my wedding day or a legendary story.

Use habitual present tense 'I improve' is okay, but the structure 'I type a legend story' is incorrect; use 'a legendary story' or 'a legend' and pluralize if referring to practice generally. Better: 'by writing stories' to express repeated practice. Ensure adjective form 'legendary' instead of noun 'legend' when describing the story.