打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için tekrarları ve dolgu sözcüklerini azaltın; net bir konu cümlesi kurduktan sonra 1-2 destekleyici neden verin ve bağlaçlar kullanın. Örneğin, “it takes a long time” ifadesini sadece bir kez söyleyip bunun sonucunu belirtin (ör. zaman kaybı, okunabilirlik). Ayrıca İngilizce fiil ve isim kullanımına dikkat edin ("handwriting" yerine "handwriting" doğru, ancak "trying to handwriting" yanlış; doğru: "trying to handwrite").

示例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient. For example, typing allows me to edit quickly and store notes digitally, which saves time. Therefore, I find typing much better than handwriting.

建议: Cümle yapısına ve kelime seçimlerine dikkat edin; yanlış kelimeler ve sıralamalar ("type keyboard" yerine "type on a keyboard", "text desktop" yerine "than a desktop") düzeltin. Bir veya iki kısa cümleyle doğrudan cevap verin, ardından nedenini bağlaçlarla açıklayın. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrar ve eksik gramer öğelerini azaltın.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I own a laptop. I find it more practical than a desktop since a desktop takes up more space and my desk is quite small.

建议: Cevabınızı daha kesin ve düzgün bir zaman çerçevesiyle verin; dolgu sözcüklerini kaldırın ve geçmiş zaman kullanımı konusunda dikkatli olun. Kısa bir ana cümleyle başlayıp ardından nedeni veya bağlamı verin. Örneğin, "I improved my typing when I was 18 because I bought a laptop" şeklinde netleştirin.

示例: I don't remember the exact moment, but I started improving my typing skills when I was about 18. I bought a laptop before university and used it frequently, which helped me get faster.

建议: Daha açıklayıcı ve doğal cevaplar verin: nasıl geliştirdiğinizi açıkça belirtin ve gerekirse örnekler veya sonuçlar ekleyin. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ("have to typing" yerine "have to type"). Bağlaçlarla mantıklı bir akış kurun ve dolgu kelimelerini azaltın.

示例: I improved my typing mainly by taking notes on my laptop every day, which forced me to practice regularly. Over time I became faster and more accurate without doing any formal training.

× When I'm trying to handwriting, uh, it's a long time.

✓ When I'm trying to write by hand, it takes a long time.

'Handwriting' is a noun; the correct verb phrase is 'write by hand' or 'write handwriting' is incorrect. Also 'it's a long time' is unnatural; use 'it takes a long time.' Use present continuous 'I'm trying' with base verb 'write.'

× I have a laptop so I type keyboard every day and I think this was more useful than text desktop.

✓ I have a laptop, so I type on the keyboard every day, and I think it is more useful than a desktop computer.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'the keyboard' and 'this' is unclear; use 'it is'. 'Text desktop' is wrong; use 'desktop computer.' Also article 'a' needed before 'desktop computer.'

× And I believe that desktop takes a lot of area and my table is not good for.

✓ And I believe that a desktop takes up a lot of space and my table is not suitable for one.

Use 'takes up' with 'space' not 'takes a lot of area.' Add article 'a' before 'desktop.' 'Not good for' needs an object: 'not suitable for one.'

× Actually, I don't remember uh, that, but I believe that I improve my typing skills when I was, umm, 18 years old, uh, because I bought this uh, laptop, uh, before university and, and I usually use my laptop.

✓ Actually, I don't remember that, but I believe that I improved my typing skills when I was 18 years old because I bought this laptop before university and I started to use my laptop regularly.

Mix of present 'improve' with past time reference 'when I was 18' requires past tense 'improved.' 'Usually use' conflicts with past context; change to 'started to use... regularly.' Remove filler words.

× I didn't actually do anything special, but uh, I always take my notes, uh, on my laptop, so I have to typing on keyboard and it's, I believe that it is, uh, useful for my typing skills.

✓ I didn't actually do anything special, but I always take my notes on my laptop, so I have to type on the keyboard, and I believe that it has helped my typing skills.

After 'have to' use base verb 'type' not 'typing.' 'On keyboard' needs article 'the keyboard.' Use present perfect 'has helped' to show result up to now.