打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答需要更清晰、直接，句式要自然并避免重复。先给出明确立场，然后用一到两句具体理由支持，使用连词（e.g. because, so）保持连贯。注意发音或词汇错误（如"preferred"时态、混淆词汇）并用恰当词汇替换。

示例: I preferred handwriting two years ago, but now I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient. For example, typing helps me edit essays quickly and send emails easily, which saves a lot of time.

建议: 回答要直接说明设备（desktop或laptop），避免不清楚或错词。用简单句说明原因，并举一两个具体用途作为支持。注意句子结构和动词形式（e.g. "I use" 而不是 "I can using"）。

示例: I type on my laptop every day because it is easy to carry. I mainly use it to write documents and send emails, so I can work from different places.

建议: 回答要用清晰的时态说明何时学习打字，避免犹豫词和重复。可以说没有上过正式课程或是在某个时间自学，再补充一两个细节（例如谁教的或通过什么方式练习）。

示例: I never took a professional typing course; I learned to type by myself before entering college. I practiced regularly at home using online lessons and typing exercises.

建议: 回答应先给出方法概述（e.g. practice regularly），然后提供具体做法（例如每天练习多长时间、使用哪个网站或练习方式）。避免填充词和断断续续的表达，使句子完整。

示例: I improve my typing by practising regularly every day. For example, I use online typing tests and exercises for 20 minutes each day, which has helped me switch from hunt-and-peck to touch typing and increase my speed.

× I preferred handwriting 2 years ago because I am a Honda and bright hound and pack per people.

✓ I preferred handwriting 2 years ago because I am a homebound and bright person.

原句时态与词汇混用造成语义混乱。首先“preferred handwriting 2 years ago”使用过去时是正确的，但后半句出现“I am a Honda and bright hound and pack per people”是词写错误或拼写/词汇错误，不属于列表中的其他类型，应保持现在时“I am ...”。建议：使用正确词汇并保持人称和时态一致。将不正确的词替换为合适的名词/形容词，例如“homebound”（居家）或“shy”（害羞），以及“bright person”（聪明的人）。具体根据说话者本意选择合适词汇。

× But now I prefer typing a lot because typing is a much more convenient and and faster before after I studying.

✓ But now I prefer typing a lot because typing is much more convenient and faster than when I was studying.

句中有时态和比较结构问题。首先说“now”应使用一般现在时“prefer”；“before after I studying”混合并且动词形式错误，应为过去时短语“when I was studying”或“before I studied”。比较结构应为“more convenient and faster than ...”。建议将时间状语改为正确的过去时表述，比较时用“than + 从句/短语”。

× Add tab on my laptop keyboard every day because it is very easy to bring and and I can using it document my my ISIS and added emails too.

✓ I use my laptop keyboard every day because it is easy to carry and I can use it to write documents and send emails.

原句结构混乱，有多处词形与语法错误：'Add tab' 无意义，应为 'I use'；'easy to bring' 应为 'easy to carry'；'I can using it document' 动词形式错误，应为 'I can use it to write documents'；重复词 'my my' 和拼写错误 'ISIS' 应为 'documents'。根据问句时态，应使用一般现在时。建议复查主谓结构并使用不定式 'to + 动词' 表目的。

× I, I haven't had any, uh, professional class to teaching how to tap uh, before I enter my, my college, umm, before that class I'm just a hand and pack per people.

✓ I hadn't had any professional classes teaching me how to type before I entered college. Before that, I was just a hunt-and-peck person.

该句涉及过去完成时与一般过去时的混用：在表示在过去某一时间之前已经没有做过某事，应使用过去完成时 'hadn't had'，随后提到具体过去时间点 'before I entered college' 用一般过去时 'entered'。'to teaching' 动词形式错误，应为 'teaching me' 或 'that taught me'。最后表达 'hunt-and-peck'（用两指或不看键盘打字）被严重拼写错误，需改正。建议按时间顺序使用过去完成时与过去时，并修正动词和习语拼写。

× I just improve my typing by, uh, typing more times as the first time I I can just hunt and pack uh, but when I type a lot of time I can, I can type faster and.

✓ I just improve my typing by typing more. At first I could only hunt-and-peck, but when I practiced typing a lot I became faster.

原句中动名词和动词时态混用：'improve by typing' 用法正确，但 'typing more times' 不自然，应为 'typing more' 或 'practicing more'。'as the first time' 应改为 'At first'；'I can just hunt and pack' 应为过去能力 'I could only hunt-and-peck'（过去习惯）；结尾不完整，应补全 'I became faster'。建议使用动名词短语表方法，用过去时描述过去的能力变化，并保持句子完整。