打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response grammatical, direct, and add one clear reason. Use a topic sentence, then one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid repetition.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and neater. For example, when I type essays I can edit quickly and save different versions, which was very helpful when I was a student.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence stating which device you use, then one concise reason using a linking word. Remove fillers and contradictory phrases.

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is portable and convenient. For instance, I can work in different rooms or take it with me when I travel.

建议: Start with a complete sentence giving the time, then add one brief detail about who taught you or how you learned. Use correct tense and simpler structure.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 14 years old. My father taught me the basics and I practiced regularly on a laptop at home.

建议: Provide a realistic, grammatically correct answer with a clear routine and one specific method. Avoid impossible time claims and reduce hesitations.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing for about 30 minutes every day using online typing exercises. Also, I focus on accuracy first and then gradually increase my speed.

× I prefer typing easier than the handwriting.

✓ I find typing easier than handwriting.

The sentence uses 'prefer' with a comparative form incorrectly. 'Prefer' is followed by a noun or gerund (prefer typing) or a clause (I prefer typing to handwriting). To express comparison using 'easier', use a verb like 'find' (I find X easier than Y) or say 'I prefer typing to handwriting.' Also 'the handwriting' is unnecessary; use 'handwriting' as an uncountable noun.

× It is useful than handwriting useful when I was child learn typing.

✓ It is more useful than handwriting. I learned to type when I was a child.

Several issues: comparative 'more useful than' must be used instead of 'useful than.' The second clause needs past tense 'learned' and correct word order: 'I learned to type when I was a child.' Include the article 'a' before 'child.' Separate into two sentences for clarity.

× Uh, my type is laptop keyboard because, uh, there's a bigger than, uh, desktop is more useful, uh, than, uh, desktop in my opinion.

✓ I usually use a laptop keyboard because, in my opinion, it is more useful than a desktop keyboard.

The original has incorrect pronoun and noun usage ('my type' is unclear) and repetition. Use 'I usually use' or 'I type on' and 'a laptop keyboard'/'desktop keyboard.' 'There's a bigger than' is ungrammatical; compare 'it is more useful than a desktop keyboard.' Place 'in my opinion' in a natural position.

× I did learn, uh, 14 years old, uh, my father teach me uh type on a keyboard.

✓ I learned when I was 14 years old; my father taught me how to type on a keyboard.

Use simple past 'learned' (not 'did learn' unless for emphasis) and include 'when I was 14 years old.' 'Teach' should be in past tense 'taught.' Use 'how to type' to show the skill learned. Punctuation separating clauses improves clarity.

× I can practice, uh, practicing my typing and I working at typing, uh, uh, every day and every horse, no, every horse, uh, 60 hours one day.

✓ I can practice typing and I work on my typing every day for about one hour.

Use the gerund 'practice typing' or 'practice' + gerund; 'practicing my typing' is redundant with 'I can practice.' 'I working at typing' needs present tense 'I work on my typing.' 'Every horse' is a mispronunciation of 'hour.' '60 hours one day' is incorrect; likely meant 'one hour a day.' Use 'for about one hour' or 'one hour a day.'