打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your response more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give 1–2 specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words (for example: because, so, therefore). Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms. Also use more precise vocabulary (e.g., "handwriting helps me remember and shows my individual style").

示例: I prefer handwriting. First, writing by hand helps me remember information better because the physical act reinforces memory. Second, handwriting reveals my personal style and improvement over time, so I can track my progress more clearly.

建议: Answer directly and avoid irrelevant repetition. State which you use and why with one or two clear reasons and a linking word (e.g., 'because', 'so'). Correct common errors ("takes a long period of time" -> "saves time") and subject-verb agreement ("does not take").

示例: I usually type on a laptop because it's portable and faster than handwriting. Also, laptops are convenient since they don't require extra equipment, so I can work anywhere.

建议: Provide a clear time frame and concise explanation. Start with when you learned (e.g., year or school level), then add one specific detail about where or how (e.g., computer class or friends). Use past tense for completed actions and correct wording ("I learned", "computer science").

示例: I learned to type when I was in secondary school, around July of my first year. I learned in a computer class and also practised with friends, which helped me improve quickly.

建议: Give a clear, structured answer: state the main method you use to improve typing, then add one or two specific steps or examples. Avoid filler words and repeated phrases. Use correct grammar ("I practised in computer classes," "teachers showed me practical techniques").

示例: I improve my typing mainly by practising regularly in computer lessons. For example, my teachers gave practical exercises and typing drills, and I followed tutor feedback to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because whenever we write or something, it's so our capability or ability of writing, it's so our writing skills as compared to typing and it's our potential or we can identify our skills in that handwriting.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when we write by hand, it shows our writing ability and helps us identify and improve our writing skills compared to typing.

The original uses incorrect and unclear pronouns and possessive forms ('our capability or ability of writing', 'it's so our writing skills'). Pronoun references are vague and redundant. Use clear noun phrases ('writing ability') and concise clauses. Also replace informal 'whenever we write or something' with 'when we write by hand' and simplify 'as compared to' to 'compared to'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Nowadays people usually do handwriting and obtain a good skills and becomes an higher level or achieve high.

✓ Nowadays people usually write by hand and develop good skills and reach a higher level.

Errors: 'do handwriting' is unnatural (use 'write by hand'), 'obtain a good skills' mixes singular/plural and articles ('good skills' or 'a good skill'), 'becomes an higher level' has wrong verb form and article. Fix subject-verb agreement and noun number and use appropriate verb 'reach'. Grammar problem type ID:27

× To be honest I always prefer to write handwriting but whenever I have to choose disk or laptop then I will go then laptops because it is quite easy and fast to write and it just takes a long period of a time.

✓ To be honest, I usually prefer handwriting, but if I have to choose between a desktop and a laptop, I choose a laptop because it is easier and faster to type and does not take a long time.

Problems: awkward structure ('prefer to write handwriting'), wrong word 'disk' instead of 'desktop', repeated 'then', incorrect phrase 'takes a long period of a time'. Correct by using 'prefer handwriting', 'choose between', and concise expressions 'easier and faster' and 'does not take a long time'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× It will be easy for us to type and it does not takes any other extra equipment.

✓ It is easy for us to type and it does not take any extra equipment.

Error: 'does not takes' uses third person singular auxiliary with base verb incorrectly; should be 'does not take'. Also 'any other extra equipment' is redundant; use 'any extra equipment'. Ensure correct verb form after auxiliary 'does'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× To be honest I learn in the physical stores which they teach from the July secondary schools near the place and I I am a computer insurance so it is quite easy for me to types and I learn it and as in my natural skills and from my friends and teammates also.

✓ To be honest, I learned in physical stores that offered lessons near my secondary school in July, and because I studied computer science, it was quite easy for me to type; I also learned from my natural ability, my friends, and teammates.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'learn' should be past 'learned' for a past event; 'which they teach from the July secondary schools near the place' is unclear—clarify as 'lessons near my secondary school in July'. 'I am a computer insurance' is incorrect—likely 'computer science' or 'computer student'; adjust to 'I studied computer science'. 'types' should be 'type'. Ensure consistent past tense and correct nouns. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I I am a computer insurance so it is quite easy for me to types and I learn it and as in my natural skills and from my friends and teammates also.

✓ I studied computer science, so it was quite easy for me to type, and I learned it through my natural ability and from my friends and teammates.

'computer insurance' is incorrect noun; correct is 'computer science' or 'computer student'. Article use and verb forms need correction: 'types' -> 'type', 'I learn it' -> 'I learned it'. Combine clauses for clarity and proper article use. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I would say when I was in a class, I usually prefer to do a practical, umm, solving in computer based, I mean the computer computer class, uh, So I always prefer some sorts and get advice from source teachers or tutors which provide me a lot of typing skills and show me the practically how can we improve our typing system.

✓ I would say that when I was in class, I usually preferred practical exercises in computer classes. I often sought advice from teachers or tutors who provided me with many typing techniques and showed me practical ways to improve my typing.

Issues: mixed tenses ('would say' with 'usually prefer' for past), incorrect use of '-ing' and awkward phrase 'do a practical, solving in computer based'. Use 'practical exercises' and consistent past tense 'preferred'. 'Show me the practically how can we improve' should be 'showed me practical ways to improve'. Also 'source teachers' -> 'teachers'. Grammar problem type ID:8