打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and direct: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (uh), avoid repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Aim for 2–3 sentences and use more natural phrasing (e.g., "I prefer handwriting because...").

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand I can recall lecture points more easily, so I retain information longer.

建议: Give a direct answer first, remove hesitations and repetitive words, and use one supporting detail with a clear linking phrase (e.g., "because", "for example"). Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use my laptop for studying and exam preparation. For example, I spent several weeks typing practice essays for a computer-based exam.

建议: Answer with a clear time reference and avoid filler phrases like "to be honest" or repeated words. Provide a brief explanation or context using a linking word (e.g., "because", "when"). Keep to 1–2 sentences.

示例: I learned to type properly when I started university last year because I needed to complete many assignments and online tests. Since then, I’ve practiced regularly to improve my speed.

建议: Provide a clear method or steps you used to improve typing, remove hesitations and unclear chronology, and use linking words to organize the explanation (e.g., "First", "Then", "As a result"). Give one concrete example of practice or resources used.

示例: I improved my typing by practicing regularly with online typing exercises and typing assignments at university. First I used a free typing website for daily 15-minute drills, then I typed coursework under time limits, which noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting rather than the typing because, uh, handwriting is the way to develop our brain and it helps to remember the things more than the usual learning.

✓ I prefer handwriting rather than typing because handwriting helps develop our brains and helps us remember things better than usual learning methods.

The definite article 'the' before 'typing' is unnecessary; 'typing' as a general activity does not need an article (Article errors/definite article). 'The things' is vague and unnecessary; use 'things' or specify. Also adjust word order and pronouns for clarity: 'develop our brain' -> 'develop our brains', and 'helps to remember the things more than the usual learning' -> 'helps us remember things better than usual learning methods.' Use parallel structure and concise phrasing. Grammar problem type ID: 17

× And handwriting is usually helpful to learning process and brain activity.

✓ Handwriting is usually helpful to the learning process and to brain activity.

The phrase 'learning process' usually requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific general concept (Article errors). Also add 'to' before 'brain activity' for parallel prepositional structure: 'helpful to the learning process and to brain activity.' Grammar problem type ID: 17

× I type on a laptop, uh, laptop keyboard keyboard every day.

✓ I type on my laptop keyboard every day.

Redundant words 'laptop, uh, laptop keyboard keyboard' create a sentence structure problem and repetition (Sentence structure errors). Remove filler and duplicates and use possessive 'my' for clarity: 'my laptop keyboard.' Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I recently prepared for my iOS computer based exam and, uh, I spend a few lot of days spent to writing on the laptop keyboard, Yeah.

✓ I recently prepared for my iOS computer-based exam and I spent several days writing on the laptop keyboard.

'A few lot of days' is an incorrect quantifier; use 'several days' or 'a few days' (Incorrect use of quantifiers). 'Spend ... spent to writing' mixes tenses and incorrect prepositions; use past tense 'spent' and the gerund 'writing' without 'to.' Also hyphenate 'computer-based.' Grammar problem type ID: 14

× To be honest, I learned, learned about typing on the keyboard on my laptop or desktop is, uh, when I was when I enrolled the admitted admission to the university recently and uh, yeah, that's it.

✓ To be honest, I learned to type on the keyboard on my laptop and desktop when I enrolled at the university recently.

The original mixes forms and has redundant words. Use 'learned to type' (correct verb + infinitive) and past simple 'learned' for a completed past action (Past tense issue). Use the preposition 'at' with 'enrolled at the university' and remove redundant words like 'admitted admission.' Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Actually, I was, I was having a lot of uh, lagging behind my intern Internet technology class because I was studying in abroad.

✓ Actually, I was falling behind in my internship Internet technology class because I was studying abroad.

'Having a lot of lagging behind' is incorrect; use 'was falling behind' or 'lagged behind.' Preposition 'in abroad' is wrong; use 'abroad' without 'in.' Also 'intern Internet technology class' is unclear; likely 'internship Internet technology class' or 'internal Internet technology class.' Here 'internship' fits better. This corrects preposition usage and verb choice (Incorrect use of prepositions). Grammar problem type ID: 11

× And then I come to the mic, come to my country and I enrolled, uh, admit admission to my umm university and I started to learn and improved my skills on typing.

✓ Then I came back to my country, enrolled at my university, and started to learn and improve my typing skills.

Use past tense 'came' and 'enrolled' for completed actions (Sentence structure and tense consistency). 'Come to the mic' is unclear and likely 'came back'; replace with 'came back to my country.' 'Admit admission' is redundant; use 'enrolled at my university.' Use parallel verbs 'started to learn and improve' for consistency. Also use 'typing skills' for natural phrasing. This addresses conjunction use and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 16