打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundant phrases and fix common grammar errors (e.g., article use, verb forms, and word order).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting. Firstly, my handwriting is often hard to read, so typing produces clearer text. Also, with technology improving, typing is faster and more convenient for sharing documents online.

建议: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give brief supporting details using correct grammar (plural/singular, verb agreement) and linking words. Be specific about frequency and reasons. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I usually use a laptop keyboard every day. Although I own both a desktop and a laptop, the laptop is more convenient for me because it is portable and I can work anywhere.

建议: Give a clear time reference and simplify phrasing. Use correct noun phrases and past tense. Replace unclear words (e.g., '8 Thunder') with '8th grade' or the appropriate term. Provide one short detail about how you learned.

示例: I learned to type when I was in 8th grade. My computer teacher showed us basic touch-typing techniques during class, and we practiced with typing exercises.

建议: Describe specific actions you take to improve, using correct tense and clearer vocabulary. Mention activities (practice apps, exercises, timed tests) and use linking words to show progression (e.g., 'At first... now... because...'). Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

示例: At first my typing was quite slow, but now it has improved a lot because I practice every day. I use online typing tests and practice apps, and I type messages and notes on my computer and phone to build speed and accuracy.

× As per my perspective, I prefer a typing because of my handwriting is a very bad and don't understand easily to someone and nowadays technology is growing day by day that's why typing is a more easily than handwriting.

✓ As I see it, I prefer typing because my handwriting is very bad and is not easy for others to read, and nowadays technology is advancing day by day, so typing is easier than handwriting.

Errors: unnecessary article 'a' before 'typing' and wrong article/wording 'a more easily'. Also sentence structure and contractions are incorrect. Suggestion: remove 'a' before uncountable noun 'typing', use 'is very bad' without extra article, replace 'don't understand easily to someone' with 'is not easy for others to read', use 'advancing' for technology, and 'easier' (adjective) instead of 'more easily' (adverb) to compare nouns. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Usually I have a one desktop and 1 laptop, but nowadays I more uses laptop because laptop is very easy to use for me and I usually use laptop keyboard everyday.

✓ I usually have one desktop and one laptop, but nowadays I use the laptop more because it is easier for me to use, and I usually use the laptop keyboard every day.

Errors: redundant 'a' with 'one desktop', numeric '1' inconsistent, wrong word order 'I more uses', missing article 'the' before 'laptop' when specific, and 'everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverb). Suggestions: use 'one' consistently, correct verb form 'use', place 'more' after verb or use 'use the laptop more', add 'the' for the specific laptop, and write 'every day' as two words. Grammar problem type ID:14

× As I remember when I was in 8 Thunder that time my own subject is a computer and my computer Sir taught me how to type on a keyboard.

✓ If I remember correctly, when I was in eighth grade my subject was computer science and my computer teacher taught me how to type on a keyboard.

Errors: unclear phrase '8 Thunder' likely means 'eighth grade', tense inconsistency using 'is' instead of past 'was', and awkward 'computer Sir' which should be 'computer teacher'. Suggestions: use past tense 'was' for past time, write 'eighth grade', and use 'computer teacher' or 'my teacher' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× In the past year my typing field is a very slow, but uh, nowadays I might strapping speed is a very high because of improvement I typing everyday in my computer and my mobile phone.

✓ Last year my typing speed was very slow, but nowadays my typing speed has increased a lot because I have been practicing on my computer and my mobile phone every day.

Errors: incorrect noun 'typing field', wrong tense and modal 'might strapping', missing articles, and word order problems. Suggestions: use 'typing speed', past tense 'was' for last year, present perfect 'has increased' to show change to now, and 'have been practicing' to show ongoing improvement; use 'every day' two words. Grammar problem type ID:6