打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make a direct topic sentence stating preference, then give 1–2 clear, specific reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g. subject-verb agreement) and avoid unclear fragments. Keep it under 5 sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing. First, writing by hand helps me remember information better, so I learn more when I write notes. Also, typing makes more mistakes and I tend to type more slowly when I am distracted.

建议: Answer directly which device you use, then give a clear reason and a specific detail. Correct word choice and sentence structure; avoid unrelated words. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences with linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I usually type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for my work. For example, I can take it to class or a café when I need to study.

建议: Start with a clear time reference, then explain briefly how you learned. Use past tense correctly and simple connectors like 'when' or 'at'. Be specific about the age or school level and the role of the teacher.

示例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. My teacher showed us the proper finger positions during computer lessons, and we practiced typing simple exercises in class.

建议: State one main method you use to improve, then give one or two specific actions or examples. Use present perfect or present simple accurately and linking words like 'by' or 'through'. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

示例: I improve my typing by practising every day using online typing exercises. For example, I spend 20 minutes on a typing website to work on speed and accuracy, and I track my progress weekly.

× I prefer 2 handwriting because I am read for more writing and typing for any mistake and don't fast.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I read more when writing, and I make more mistakes when typing, so I don't type quickly.

Pronoun and sentence structure errors: '2' is incorrect; likely meant 'to' or a numbering—remove it. 'I am read for more writing' is ungrammatical; use 'I read more when writing' or 'I prefer writing because I write more neatly by hand.' 'typing for any mistake and don't fast' mixes pronouns and adverbs; correct to 'I make more mistakes when typing, so I don't type quickly.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct subject-verb objects, and place adverbs correctly.

× I usually forum nostalgia laptop and keyboard because everyday I am poor my. Laptop to work.

✓ I usually use an old laptop and its keyboard because every day my laptop performs poorly for work.

Many lexical and word-form errors: 'forum nostalgia' is incorrect — likely 'an old' or 'a nostalgic' laptop; replace with 'an old laptop.' 'everyday' should be 'every day' as two words meaning each day. 'I am poor my. Laptop to work' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'my laptop performs poorly for work' or 'my laptop is not good for work.' Suggestion: use correct verb 'use', correct article 'an', separate 'every day', and use proper verb phrase for device performance.

× When I watch a primary school that time my teacher learn to keyboard and he also to make keyboard types.

✓ When I was in primary school, my teacher taught me how to type on a keyboard, and he also taught us different typing techniques.

Tense and verb form errors: 'watch a primary school that time' is wrong; use past continuous or simple past: 'When I was in primary school' indicates time. 'my teacher learn to keyboard' uses base verb 'learn' instead of past 'taught' and wrong voice—teacher teaches students, so use 'taught me how to type.' 'make keyboard types' is unclear; clarify as 'taught us different typing techniques.' Suggestion: use past tense for past events and correct verb pairs (teach/taught vs learn/learned).

× Well, I have improve my typing I because I have any day typing practice and practice now better than to my daily routine and I improve her my.

✓ Well, I have improved my typing because I practice typing every day; now my typing is better than before.

Present perfect and word order errors: 'I have improve' needs past participle 'improved' with present perfect 'have improved.' 'I have any day typing practice' should be 'I practice typing every day.' 'practice now better than to my daily routine' is ungrammatical; intended: 'now my typing is better than before.' 'I improve her my' is nonsensical and should be removed. Suggestion: use 'have improved' for present perfect, place adverbs ('every day') correctly, and compare current skill to past using 'better than before.'