打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid redundancy and unnecessary filler.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use a computer and smartphone every day, so typing is faster and more convenient for me. For example, I compose emails and notes on my phone while commuting, which saves time compared with writing by hand.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, and support with one specific detail about frequency or tasks. Use linking words to make it coherent.

示例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard because my work PC is a desktop. As a result, I spend several hours each day typing reports and emails, so I’m very comfortable with that keyboard.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and a concise explanation; avoid fillers and repetition. Add one specific detail about how you learned (class, practice, program).

示例: I learned to type in fifth grade when our school introduced basic computer lessons. In those classes we practiced typing assignments and emails, which helped me build accuracy and speed.

建议: Start with a direct topic sentence and give one or two specific methods you use to improve, with linking words. This will make your answer more informative and natural.

示例: I improve my typing mainly through deliberate practice. For example, I use online typing exercises twice a week and set small goals for accuracy and speed, which has steadily improved my performance.

× I think I prefer typing and that is because that I use daily by computer as well as my smartphone.

✓ I think I prefer typing because I use a computer as well as my smartphone daily.

The original sentence misuses 'that' and the pronoun structure 'that I use daily by computer' is incorrect. Replace 'that is because that' with 'because' and use the pronoun and noun order 'I use a computer as well as my smartphone daily' for clarity and correct word order. Also place 'daily' at the end for natural adverb placement.

× I often type on my desktop keyboard. My work PC is a desktop and because I spent most of my days sitting and working, umm yes, I do spend quite a lot of time typing on my desktop keyboards and I find it quite easy to do.

✓ I often type on my desktop keyboard. My work PC is a desktop, and because I spend most of my days sitting and working, I do spend quite a lot of time typing on my desktop keyboard and I find it quite easy to do.

The plural 'keyboards' is inconsistent with the singular 'desktop keyboard' earlier; use singular 'keyboard' to match the stated single PC. Also change past 'spent' to present 'spend' to maintain consistent present-tense description. Remove filler 'umm yes' for clarity.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard. I think it was in my 5th grade at the time we were asked to produce some text or some assignments over, you know, an e-mail and the results I I got forced to to type on the keyboard.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard. I think it was in fifth grade when we were asked to produce some text or assignments by e-mail, and as a result I was forced to type on the keyboard.

Use 'fifth grade' (no ordinal abbreviation) and 'when' for the time clause. 'Produce some text or some assignments over an e-mail' is wrong; use 'by e-mail'. 'I I got forced to to type' has extra words and wrong voice; change to passive 'I was forced to type' or active 'they made me type'. Correct past tense and remove duplicates.

× I believe it's by practicing that you can improve anything. So if typing, the more you type on the keyboards, the better you get with time. So practicing is definitely the key to type faster and better on the keyboard.

✓ I believe practicing is how you can improve anything. So with typing, the more you type on the keyboard, the better you get over time. Practicing is definitely the key to typing faster and better on the keyboard.

Original has awkward cleft construction 'it's by practicing that you can improve anything'—simplify to 'practicing is how you can improve anything.' Use singular 'keyboard' for general reference and 'over time' instead of 'with time.' Use gerund 'typing faster' after 'key to' rather than infinitive 'to type.' These changes fix present-tense phrasing and verb form after 'key to.'