打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và trật tự từ: tránh dùng cấu trúc sai như “prefer A than B” (phải là “prefer A to B”). Giảm sự lặp lại và thêm câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Nên sửa lỗi phát âm nhẹ (uh) và viết câu ngắn gọn (không quá 5 câu). Thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ lý do (ví dụ: soạn email, gõ nhanh).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient for everyday tasks like emails and notes. For instance, I can quickly edit and share documents online, which handwriting cannot do. However, I sometimes use handwriting for personal notes because it feels more personal.

建议: Sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và chính xác, tránh câu rời rạc. Sử dụng liên từ (for example, however) để kết nối ý, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (It’s so fast; to watch a movie). Nên nêu thêm tần suất hoặc ví dụ cụ thể về công việc/games để câu rõ ràng hơn.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because I can take it anywhere, which makes it very convenient for studying and working. It’s fast and efficient for writing essays or checking emails. Occasionally I use my father’s desktop for gaming or watching movies at home.

建议: Sửa lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc câu: dùng “learned how to type” not “tie”; “primary school” not “primary screen”. Trình bày mạch lạc với một câu chủ đề và một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ (khi nào, ai dạy, phương pháp). Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa như “visiting”.

示例: I learned how to type when I was in primary school. My teacher taught us basic typing techniques, and we practiced using simple exercises to learn the keyboard layout.

建议: Làm rõ hành động cụ thể để cải thiện: nói rõ phương pháp (practice with online tests, use typing software, focus on accuracy and speed). Tránh tiếng ậm ừ và dùng cấu trúc chuẩn như “I improve my typing by…”. Giữ tối đa 3 câu, mỗi câu rõ ràng.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests to increase my speed and accuracy. I also use different laptops to get used to various keyboards. Additionally, I review the correct finger positions I learned at school.

× I prefer typing than handwriting because typing is more convenient, more fast and more technical.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is more convenient, faster and more technical.

Use 'prefer to' not 'prefer than'. Use comparative adverb 'faster' instead of 'more fast'. Keep parallel adjectives; 'more technical' is acceptable but consider 'more efficient' for clarity.

× But to be honest, in some case I use handwriting uh.

✓ But to be honest, in some cases I use handwriting.

Use plural 'cases' when referring to occasional situations; include article or determiner if needed. Remove filler 'uh'.

× I usually type on laptop keyboard because I can bring it to everywhere I want.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I can take it everywhere I want.

Need the indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Use 'take' rather than 'bring' when speaking about carrying something with you. Remove 'to' before 'everywhere'.

× Is so fast, convenient, efficient.

✓ It is so fast, convenient and efficient.

Sentence is missing a subject; add 'It' and connect adjectives with 'and' for correct coordination.

× When I have to work sometime I use my father's desktop to watching a movie or playing game.

✓ When I have to work sometimes I use my father's desktop to watch a movie or play games.

After 'to' use the base verb 'watch' (infinitive) not 'watching'. Use 'sometimes' for adverb placement and plural 'games'.

× I've learned how to tie on the keyboard on my primary screen.

✓ I learned how to type on the keyboard in primary school.

Use simple past 'learned' for a past completed action. Correct 'tie' to 'type'. 'Primary screen' is incorrect; use 'primary school' and 'in' not 'on'.

× I have learned basic skill many visiting about typing on the keyboard and learn about structure of keywords.

✓ I learned basic typing skills from many lessons about typing on the keyboard and learned about the structure of the keys.

Use plural 'skills' and 'lessons' (or 'classes') instead of 'visiting'. Maintain past tense consistency 'learned'. Use 'keys' for keyboard parts and include article 'the'.

× I involve my typing skill by practicing regularly.

✓ I improve my typing skills by practicing regularly.

Use verb 'improve' not 'involve'. Use plural 'skills'. Use preposition 'by' correctly with gerund 'practicing'.

× Use more laptops and learn, uh, carefully about, umm, basic typing school what I what's taught at primary school.

✓ I use laptops more and learn carefully about the basic typing taught at primary school.

Make subject explicit 'I'. Place adverb 'more' after verb 'use' for clarity. Remove fillers. Reorder phrase to 'the basic typing taught at primary school' and correct pronoun/auxiliary errors ('what I what's taught' is wrong).