打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make language more natural and correct small collocation and tense issues; shorten redundancies and add a linking phrase to contrast the two choices. Be careful with verbs like 'prepare'—use 'write' or 'use'.

示例: It depends on the situation. I usually write notes by hand when I study because it helps me remember information better. However, for work tasks and emails I use typing because it’s faster and much easier to edit.

建议: Clarify and correct awkward phrases and add a linking word to explain reason. Avoid repetition (e.g. 'prepare the desktop keyboards'). Use concise phrasing and correct collocations like 'comfortable for long periods' or 'more comfortable for extended use'.

示例: At work I use a desktop computer and I type on its keyboard every day because I need to take meeting minutes and prepare reports. Also, I find a desktop keyboard more comfortable for long periods of typing.

建议: This answer is clear and well-structured. To improve further, tighten minor hesitations and add a brief linking phrase to show result. Avoid filler like 'I think' if you can be confident.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 13 in ICT lessons at school. I practiced regularly in those classes, so I became quite fast and comfortable using the keyboard.

建议: Good content and specifics. Improve coherence by using linking words to show sequence and avoid tense inconsistency—use present simple or present perfect consistently when describing habitual practice and results.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing tests and exercises. After a month or two of daily practice, my speed and accuracy improve noticeably, so now I can type many more words per minute with fewer mistakes.

× It depends on the situation. When I take personal notes or study, I prepare handwriting because it helps when you remember things.

✓ It depends on the situation. When I take personal notes or study, I write by hand because it helps me remember things.

The verb phrase 'prepare handwriting' is unnatural and incorrect in English; use 'write by hand'. Also 'helps when you remember things' is awkward and shifts person; use 'helps me remember things' to match the subject and make the meaning clear. This addresses incorrect verb choice and incorrect pronoun reference (use of 'you' instead of 'me'). Suggested improvement: Use natural verb phrases (write by hand) and keep the same subject reference (me).

× For work tasks and emails, I usually prepare typing since it's faster and easier to edit.

✓ For work tasks and emails, I usually type because it's faster and easier to edit.

'Prepare typing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'type'. Removing 'prepare' and using 'type' fixes the verb choice. The rest of the sentence is correct. Suggested improvement: Use the core verb for the action (type) instead of prepare + verb form.

× At work I use a desktop computer and I type notes on its keyboard every day because I need to record meeting minutes and prepare reports.

✓ At work I use a desktop computer and I type notes on its keyboard every day because I need to record meeting minutes and prepare reports.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. It correctly uses singular 'a desktop computer' and possessive 'its keyboard'.

× I prepare the desktop keyboards and it's more comfortable for long term business.

✓ I prefer the desktop keyboard because it's more comfortable for long-term work.

'I prepare the desktop keyboards' is incorrect: 'prepare' is the wrong verb and 'keyboards' (plural) conflicts with using a single desktop. The intended meaning is preference, so use 'prefer'. 'Long term' as a modifier should be hyphenated ('long-term') and 'business' in this context is better as 'work'. Also match singular/plural ('keyboard'). Suggested improvement: use 'prefer' for choices, match singular/plural, and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× When I was a teenager, about 13 years old, I think, we had ICT lessons at school where we learned typing on the computer.

✓ When I was a teenager, about 13 years old, I think, we had ICT lessons at school where we learned to type on the computer.

'Learned typing' is understandable but the more natural construction is 'learned to type' (verb + to-infinitive) when describing learning an action. This addresses verb form choice for learned activities. Suggested improvement: use 'learned to + verb' for learned actions.

× I practiced regularly in those classes, which helped me become quite fast and comfortable with the keyboard.

✓ I practiced regularly in those classes, which helped me become quite fast and comfortable with the keyboard.

This sentence is correct. Past tense 'practiced' and 'helped' are consistent and appropriate for a past event.

× To improve my typing, I practice regularly using online typing tests and exercises.

✓ To improve my typing, I practice regularly using online typing tests and exercises.

This sentence is correct. Present simple 'practice' is appropriate for a routine habit.

× After one or two months of daily practice, my speed and accuracy improve significantly.

✓ After one or two months of daily practice, my speed and accuracy improve significantly.

If the speaker refers to a habitual result after a period of practice, present simple 'improve' is acceptable. If referring to past improvement from a past practice period, use past tense 'improved'. Context implies habitual improvement, so no change needed. Suggested improvement: ensure tense matches intended meaning: use 'improved' for past single events, 'improve' for general truths.

× I can now type many more words per minute and make fewer mistakes.

✓ I can now type many more words per minute and make fewer mistakes.

This sentence is correct. Modal 'can' plus base verbs 'type' and 'make' are used correctly to express ability and result.